Question

前段时间，由于传染病，课，很多学生由于用眼过度，视力下降很快。假如你是扬州中学的学生李华，请你用英文向全校同学发起以”爱护眼睛”为主题的倡议书，内容包括:

1. 用眼存在的问题；

2. 爱护眼睛意义；

3. 提出倡议。

注意:1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.参考词汇: 传染病epidemic

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Answer

Dear fellow students,

Some time ago, many students took online classes due to the epidemic situation ,suffering from poor eyesight . Thus, I’m advocating “Protect Our Eyes”.

Eyes are the window to the soul. Having good eyesight means we can not only see things clearly but also appreciate beautiful scenes better. Anyway, only when we form a good habit of protecting eyes, such as doing regular eye-exercises and reading in right light, can we really enjoy our life.

See well, live well. So don’t hesitate to act at once!

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生发起一封以“爱护眼睛”为主题的倡议书。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：一般现在时

结构：总-分

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.主题：爱护眼睛。2.内容：用眼存在的问题；爱护眼睛的意义；提出倡议。

第二步：列提纲（重点单词和词组）

eye，epidemic, suffer from, due to, eyesight, such as, hesitate, advocate, anyway, form a good habit of, protect, eye-exercises,soul,be concerned about...

第三步：连词成句

1. Many students took online classes due to the epidemic situation, suffering from poor eyesight.

2. Eyes are the window to the soul.

3. Anyway, only when we form a good habit of protecting eyes.

4. Doing regular eye-exercises and reading in right light can help to protect our eyes.

5. See well, live well.

第四步：连句成篇（增加衔接词及适当句式）

1.表并列补充关系：not only…but also, anyway

2.表因果关系：thus，so

3.表建议句式：

You had better do sth…,

It would be wise of you to…

I’m advocating “Protect Our Eyes”.

第五步：润色修改