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Basketball fans around the world are mourning the dead of American superstar Kobe Bryant. Bryant killed in a helicopter crash last Sunday in California, along with her l3-year-old daughter Gianna and seven other people, Bryant was an 18-time All-Star player. He won five NBA championship and two Olympic gold medals. He was wide considered one of the great basketball players of his generation during his 20-year career with the Los Angeles Lakers. The helicopter carry Bryant and the others crash into a hilly area in foggy conditions outside Los Angeles. The cause for the crash is under an investigation.
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Dressed in n flowing long robe 1.（decorate）with floral embroidery（花卉刺绣）from a past era, stylist Xiao Hang looks like she surfaced from a time machine. She walks across the noisy Beijing subway, 2.（attract）curious glances and questions.
China 3.（welcome）western fashion and futuristic technology during the last decades, 4. a growing number of young people like Xiao are looking to the past for their dressing choices. 5.（obvious）, they prefer to put on traditional “hanfu”, or “Han clothing”.
These historic 6.（costume）of the Han ethnic majority are enjoying a renaissance because the government is promoting traditional culture. Period dramas have also contributed to a 7.（great）interest in traditional Chinese clothing and a higher demand for it.
Xiao, who used to work at a state-owned machine manufacturing company，now runs her own hanfu business,8. she dresses customers for photo shoots and even plans hanfu-style weddings. However, there is some way before the style reaches wide 9.（accept）in China. Many people say their hesitation is due to the odd looks they get when wearing hanfu 10. public.
A back injury drove Briton Rose Oliver to tai chi, which led her to her husband and then took both of them to China. Twenty years ago, Oliver’s back injury _________ her childhood dream of becoming a ballet dancer. But the injury did _________ her to tai chi, a martial art _________ practiced in slow motion. Her initial hope was to improve her _________, however , it turned out to bring her more. She later married her _________, Rey Nelson, who taught her how to play tai chi , and founded a school with him, _________ the martial art to more than 10,000 students over eight years.
In 2000, the couple moved to Shanghai. They taught _________ in universities and happily _________ tai chi under various masters to enhance their skills in playing. After years of practice, Oliver found her occasional _________ had disappeared amazingly. But her greatest pain __________ when her husband died in 2003, leaving her alone to follow their __________ passion for tai chi. She thought of __________. But she finally determined to carry on to __________ her husband.
With the __________ of her tai chi “family” — the masters and students, Oliver spent her time outside tai chi teaching English as she did before and __________ cultural-exchange events. She founded the Double Dragon Alliance, which __________ Chinese kung fu masters to teach martial arts to westerners and organizes seminars and events for them to __________ Chinese massage, acupuncture, traditional medicine, and calligraphy.
Because of her __________ to cultural exchange, Oliver was given he Shanghai Magnolia Award, an award given to foreigners who have made __________ contributions to the city. And she has been officially __________ as a Member of the Order of the British Empire by Britain’s Queen Elizabeth II-one of the highest honors to a citizen.
1.A.realized B.destroyed C.promoted D.decreased
2.A.limit B.cheat C.lead D.devote
3.A.typically B.rarely C.immediately D.simply
4.A.figure B.appetite C.appearance D.health
5.A.instructor B.colleague C.supervisor D.classmate
6.A.supplying B.explaining C.guaranteeing D.teaching
7.A.sports B.language C.music D.art
8.A.watched B.suspected C.learnt D.accepted
9.A.backaches B.headaches C.toothaches D.stomachaches
10.A.strengthened B.faded C.came D.worsened
11.A.previous B.separate C.shared D.temporary
12.A.coming off B.standing up C.turning away D.giving up
13.A.honor B.accompany C.comfort D.understand
14.A.influence B.support C.education D.agreement
15.A.collecting B.attending C.analyzing D.covering
16.A.enables B.orders C.promises D.reminds
17.A.exchange B.experience C.sponsor D.explore
18.A.inspiration B.suggestion C.adaptation D.contribution
19.A.natural B.professional C.significant D.hopeful
20.A.required B.celebrated C.respected D.announced
Empathy（共情）, the ability to understand other people, has dropped sharply among college students over the past 10 years. 1. Turn on the TV, and you’re showed with news and reality shows full of people, fighting, competing, and generally treating one another with no respect. Human beings learn by example and most of the examples on TV are anything but empathetic. 2.
Having relationships with other people is an important part of being human and having empathy is decisive to it. Researchers have also found that the empathetic teenagers are more likely to have high self-respect. Besides, empathy can be a cure for loneliness, sadness, anxiety and fear.3. Many top companies report hut empathy is one of the most important things they expect from new managers. 4. Apparently, empathy is n kind of “emotional intelligence” that will help us achieve it.
Then, 5. For starters, let down your guard and really listen to others. One doesn’t develop empathy by having a lot of opinions and doing a lot of talking. To really develop empathy, you’d better volunteer at a nursing home or a hospital, join a club or a team that has a diverse membership, have a “sharing circle” with your family, or spend time caring for pets at an animal shelter.
A.How can we take advantage of empathy?
B.Empathy is even an indication of a good leader.
C.What’s the best way to improve empathy?
D.There are good reasons not to follow those bad examples.
E.Today, people spend more time alone rather than join clubs.
F.That might be because so many people have replaced face time with screen time.
G.Academics are vital but without emotional intelligence , you won’t be successful in life.
Do some kinds of video games cause violence? Scientific studies do not suggest a link. But the idea that there is a link between violent video games and violent acts reappeared following the mass shooting in El Paso, Texas, last weekend. An online statement thought to be written by the El Paso gunman mentioned the video game “Call of Duty”.
On Monday, President Donald Trump said that “terrifying video games” contribute to a “glorification of violence”. American politicians have long made similar statements. Benjamin Burroughs is a professor of media at the University of Las Vegas. He said that there is no linkage to gun violence, when mentioning video games. Burroughs pointed out that some studies show a short-term increase in aggressive thoughts and feelings after playing video games, but nothing that rises to the level of violence. “Plenty of gamers get upset when they lose or feel the game was ‘cheating’, but it doesn’t lead to violent outputs,” Burroughs stressed.
In 2006, a small study by researchers at Indiana University found that teenagers who played violent video games showed higher levels of emotional arousal（激发）—strong emotions like anger or fear. The teenagers also showed less activity in the parts of the brain associated with the ability to plan，control and direct thoughts and behavior.
Patrick Markey，the psychology professor，found in his research that men who commit severe acts of violence actually play violent video games less than the average male. Another study by Markey and other researchers showed that violence tends to go down when a new violent movie or video game comes out. One possible explanation is that people are at home playing the game or in theaters watching the movie. Markey believes that video games might excite people, but they do not change who people are. “It is like going to see a sad movie,” Markey said of playing video games. “It might make you cry but it doesn’t make you clinically depressed,” he said.
1.Why is the mass shooting in EI Paso, Texas mentioned in the first paragraph?
A.To show the necessity of scientific studies.
B.To support the writer’s own viewpoint.
C.To show the seriousness of violent acts.
D.To serve as evidence for the assumption.
2.What are the similarities between Benjamin Burroughs and Patrick Markey?
A.Both are specialists in psychology in the USA.
B.Both acknowledge video game roused emotional change.
C.Both present their ideas through doing research.
D.Both worry about the potential dangers caused by video games.
3.What can be learned about the research in 2006?
A.Teenagers tested in it become more emotional.
B.Its findings set alarm for young video game players.
C.Teenagers mentioned in it mainly come from Indiana.
D.Its researchers are strongly for banning video games.
4.What is the best title for the text?
A.Violence—a by-product of video games.
B.Video games—the cause of violence or not.
C.Video games—the promoter of the mass shoot.
D.Violence—a threat for game players or not.
Chocolates, syrup（糖浆）, cream on top, many of the hot drinks we consume even more at this time of year certainly sound sugary, but just how much sugar they contain might come as a shock.
The health campaign group Action on Sugar has found that Starbucks hot chocolate made with milk has almost 94 grams of sugar. That equals 23 teaspoons. At Caffe Nero, the salted hot chocolate packs in almost 60 grams of sugar, about 15 leaspoons. And Casta’s cream latte（拿铁）has 32 grams of sugar, that’s 8 teaspoons.
The drink makers won’t have those details listed next to the price. If known, it would be quite alarming. That’s how capitalism works. The capitalists have to get people addicted to certain things to keep selling it more. If told the amount of sugar contained，many would take hot drinks just as a treat not on a daily basis. Some drinks have actually reduced in sugar over the past few years，but many more haven’t. The most sugary seasonal drink was from Starbucks with more than 14 teaspoons of sugar. Other companies like breakfast cereal manufacturers and yogurt manufacturers are reducing sugar. And so is soft drinks，yet the milk based drinks, milk shakes，hot chocolates and lattes just don’t seem to have changed in the same way.
And while some companies are actually being really responsible reducing their sugar, some have actually increased that in the last two years which just seems ridiculous. Coffee chains do offer low-calorie alternatives. But Action on Sugar are still calling for more tax on hot coffee drinks. Not much of a Christmas present for the coffee chains, but maybe a gift in the long term for our health.
1.What does the first two paragraphs mainly talk about?
A.Consumers favor sugar contained hot drinks.
B.The amount of sugar in some hot drinks is frightening.
C.Famous hot drink makers prefer hot chocolate series.
D.Cream latte is the signature hot drink for Starbucks.
2.What can we learn about hot drink makers?
A.Most of them are trying to reduce sugar in certain drinks.
B.Chocolate and syrup are irreplaceable part of their products.
C.They won’t show the consumer how much sugar a drink contains.
D.Four of them have been investigated by the health campaign group.
3.What’s the writer’s attitude toward the hot drink makers?
A.Supportive. B.Doubtful.
C.Objective. D.Reserved.
4.How can the sugar-originated hot drink problem be eased?
A.Taxes can be raised on hot drink makers like coffee chains.
B.More official groups like Action on Sugar could be founded.
C.Sugar content can be labeled in place of the price for hot drinks.
D.Warnings can be given to those enjoying weekly hot drinks.
