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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was asked to deliver the speech before the whole class at the age of 9. I felt shy the moment when I thought of that. Therefore, I had no choice but to prepare for it. The real moment began when I stood on the platform with so many eyes fixing on me. My listener were waiting patiently. I gradual found myself back, giving my speech. My audience applauded at last, that meant I made it.

Since then, my fear of talking before lots of people disappeared. The greatest difficulty on our way to success is your fear. Overcome it, or we will be able to achieve our goals.

 

1.the→a 2.去掉when 3.therefore→however 4.fixing→fixed 5.listener→listeners 6.gradual→gradually 7.that→which 8.disappear前加has 9.your→our 10.or→and 或will→won’t 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者在一次演讲中战胜恐惧的故事。 1.考查冠词。句意:9岁的时候,我被要求在全班同学面前发表以此演讲。此处的speech泛指一次演讲,不是特指,且speech首字母的发音为辅音音素,故speech前的the要改为a。 2.考查时间状语从句。句意:我一想到那件事就觉得不好意思。此处的the moment 译为“一…...就”而when译为“当…...时”。两者都连词,都可以引导时间状语从句。但该处句意表示“一想到那件事就觉得不好意思”。故去掉when。 3.考查副词。句意:然后,我别无选择,只能准备它。此句和前句不表示因果关系而应表示转折关系。故将Therefore改为However。 4.考查非谓语动词。句意:真正的时刻开始了,当我站在讲台上,那么多的眼睛盯着我。此处的fix和逻辑主语eyes之间表示被动关系,非主动。故将fixing改为fixed。 5.考查名词的数。句意:我的听众在耐心地等待着。根据“were”可知,此处的listener表示听众,是可数名词。可数名词要表示单复数。故将listener改为listeners。 6.考查副词。句意:我渐渐找回了自我,开始演讲。此处的gradual译为逐渐的,词性是形容词。形容词不能修饰动词found,所以用副词修饰动词。故将gradual改为gradually。 7.考查非限制性定语从句。句意:我的观众终于鼓起掌来,这意味着我成功了。此处是一个非限制性定语从句,而that不能引导非限制性定语从句。which可以引导“非限”指代前面“观众终于站起来鼓掌”这件事。故将that改为which。 8.考查时态。句意:从那以后,我害怕在很多人面前说话的恐惧消失了。此处的disappeared所处的简单句已有时间状语“since then”。该时间状语是现在完成时的时间状语。又因disappeared的逻辑主语是“说话的恐惧”。 不可数名词做主语。故在要在disappeared前加助动词has。 9.考查代词。句意:成功路上最大的困难是恐惧。此处前后的人称代词不一致,前面是our way后面却是your fear。根据句意,此处要表达是,我们的恐惧是我们成功之路最大的困难。故将your改为our。 10.考查连词/否定句。句意:克服它,我们就能实现我们的目标/克服它/否则我们将无法实现我们的目标。此处两句话之间表示承接关系,克服它我们就能成功。故将or改为and。/ 根据句意,还可以表示“克服它,否则我们是不会成功”。故将will改为won’t。  
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