Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

This morning when I got into the taxi I have booked,I noticed it was a same gentleman that had

taken me back home last week. I still remembered that we'd talked about. He said he thought somebody

would care,so he felt surprised and was happily to know I still remembered him. He said he began to swim to lose weight,but he did it every morning before start work. I told him that swimming was one of the greatest way to keep us healthy and it also had positive effeets on our brains,too. He said he knew it was a good way avoiding depression and that he would keep on doing it all the time.

Answer

1.have→had

2.a→the

3.that→what

4.somebody→nobody

5.happily→happy

6.but→and

7.start→starting

8.way→ways

9.去掉also

10.way后加of

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。短文叙述了作者今天乘坐出租车时，碰巧遇到了上周拉自己回家的司机师傅，作者与司机进行了一番关于游泳话题的交谈。

第一处：考查时态。分析句子可知，“我已经预定”发生在got into the taxi这个动作之前，所以定语从句为过去完成时。故将have改成had。

第二处：考查冠词。same前的冠词为定冠词the。故将a改成the。

第三处：考查连接词。remembered后接宾语从句,宾语从句中，talked about缺少宾语，所以用连接代词what充当其宾语。故将that改成what。

第四处：考查代词。句意：他说他以为没人会记得他，所以他很惊讶，很高兴我还记得他。根据句意可知，表示“他以为没人会记得他”。故将somebody改成nobody。

第五处：考查形容词。be happy to do sth“高兴做某事”。为固定句型。be后接形容词作表语。故将happily改成happy。

第六处：考查连词。句意：他说他开始为了减肥而游泳，并且他每天早上上班前都会去游泳。根据句意，前后句意为并列关系。故将but改成and。

第七处：考查动名词。before为介词，后接动名词。故将start改成starting。

第八处：考查名词复数。one of 后接名词复数形式。故将way改成ways。

第九处：考查副词。本句中已经有“too”，所以also重复了。故去掉also。

第十处：考查介词。way of doing sth “做某事的方法”。故将way后加of。