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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从11处起)不计分。

I went to watch the ballet, the Peony Pavilion last Sunday’s evening. Because I think ballet was more or less the same everywhere, I was totally unprepared for its uniquely beauty. I was absorb as soon as the curtain rose. The performance borrowed a lot from Chinese dance and its the music, but the East influences on the ballet was clear. The production was filled in colors and romantic symbols, and challenged my senses in many different way. So much did I enjoy it that it changed opinion about ballet. I can’t wait to going again!

 

1. Sunday’s  Sunday 2. think  thought 3. uniquely  unique 4. absorb  absorbed 5. the music前删除the 6. but  so 7. in  with 8. way  ways 9. opinion前面加my 10. going  go 【解析】 本文是记叙文。讲述了作者上周日晚上去看芭蕾舞《牡丹亭》,对芭蕾舞有了新的了解。从此喜欢上了芭蕾舞。 1.考查名词。此处指上周日晚上,是last Sunday evening,用名词修饰evening,不用所有格,故Sunday’s 改为 Sunday。 2.考查动词时态。此处指作者看芭蕾舞剧之前的想法,根据last Sunday evening和went可知用一般过去时,故think 改为thought。 3.考查形容词。修饰名词beauty用形容词,指“独特的美丽”,故uniquely 改为unique。 4.考查被动语态。此处指我被吸引,是被动语态。was后用过去分词,故absorb 改为absorbed。 5.考查冠词。此处指中国舞蹈的音乐,music由its修饰,music前的the是多余的,故the music前删除the。 6.考查连词。句意:表演中大量借鉴了中国舞蹈及其音乐,所以东方的影响是显而易见的。前后句不是转折关系,是因果关系。故but 改为so。 7.考查固定短语。表示“被……充满”是be filled with,故in 改为with。 8.考查名词。此处指“以很多不同的方式”,由different修饰名词要用复数,故way 改为ways。 9.考查代词。句意:我非常喜欢它,以至于它改变了我对芭蕾的看法。此处指“改变了我的观点”,故opinion前面加my。 10.考查动词形式。“迫不及待做某事”是can’t wait to do sth.,to后加动词原形,故going 改为 go。  
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This taboo is falling fast, not only in France but across Western countries, after increasing 5.(cry) from experts who say the practice is effective in curbing the coronavirus pandemic.

The shift for Western nations is profound and has had to overcome not merely the logistical challenges of securing enough masks, which are significant enough, but also a deep 6. (culture) resistance and even stigma (污名) associated with mask-wearing, 7. some Western leaders described flatly as “alien.”

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1.A.ignore B.solve C.interpret D.stress

2.A.Casually B.Ridiculously C.Controversially D.Thankfully

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4.A.tutors B.conditions C.values D.tools

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6.A.though B.until C.since D.after

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17.A.holiday B.school C.adult D.adolescent

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A.It will be the lives you have touched and the difference you have made.

B.In all negotiations, don’t bargain for the last, little advantage.

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“One of the sessions that moved me the most was state violence on black women and black girls,” says Chasin, explaining that in one room, people wrote down the names of those killed because of it. “People do beautiful work and leave beautiful messages.”

1.What does the project Writing On It All invite people to do?

A.Unlearn their training in drawing.

B.Participate in a state graffiti show.

C.Cover the walls of an old house with graffiti.

D.Exhibit their artistic creations in an old house.

2.What did the project participants do during the 2016 season?

A.They were free to scribble on the walls whatever came to their mind.

B.They expressed their thoughts in graffiti on the theme of each session.

C.They learned the techniques of collaborative writing.

D.They were required to cooperate with other creators.

3.What kind of place is Governor’s Island?

A.It is a historic site that attracts tourists and artists.

B.It is an area now accessible only to tourist vehicles.

C.It is a place in Upper New York Bay formerly used for exiles.

D.It is an open area for tourists to enjoy themselves year round.

4.What does Chasin say about the project?

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C.It has started the career of many creative artists.

D.It has created some meaningful artistic works.

 

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    Jenny was a bright-eyed, pretty five-year-old girl. One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace priced at $2.50. How she wanted that necklace! When she asked her mother if she would buy it for her, her mother said, “Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I’ll tell you what. I’ll buy you the necklace, and when we get home we can make up a list of housework that you can do to pay for the necklace. And don’t forget that for your birthday, Grandma just might give you a whole dollar bill, too. Okay?” Jenny agreed, and her mother bought the pearl necklace for her.

Jenny worked on her housework very hard every day, and sure enough, her grandma gave her a brand-new dollar bill for her birthday. Soon Jenny had paid off the pearls. How Jenny loved those pearls. She wore them everywhere to kindergarten, bed and when she went out with her mother to run errands (跑腿). The only time she didn’t wear them was in the shower. Her mother had told her that they would turn her neck green!

Jenny had a very loving daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would get up from his favorite chair every night and read Jenny her favorite story.

One night when he finished the story, he said, “Jenny, do you love me?”

“Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you,” the little girl said.

“Well, then, give me your pearls.”

“Oh! Daddy, not my pearls!” Jenny said. “But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. And you can have her tea party outfit, too. Okay?”

“Oh no, darling, that’s okay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss. “Good night, little one.”

A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story.

“Do you love me?”

“Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you.”

“Well, then, give me your pearls.”

“Oh, Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Ribbons, my toy horse. Do you remember her? She’s my favorite. Her hair is so soft, and you can play with it and braid it and everything. You can have Ribbons if you want her, Daddy,” the little girl said to her father.

“No, that’s okay,” her father said and brushed her cheek again with a kiss. “God bless you, little one. Sweet dreams.”

Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her a story, Jenny was sitting on her bed and her lip was trembling. “Here, Daddy,” she said, and held out her hand. She opened it and her beloved pearl necklace was inside. She let it slip into her father’s hand.

With one hand her father held the plastic pearls and the other he pulled out of his pocket a blue velvet box. Inside of the box were real, genuine, beautiful pearls. He had had them all along. He was waiting for Jenny to give up the cheap stuff so that he could give her the real thing.

1.Why did the mother tell Jenny the plastic pearl necklace “cost an awful lot of money”?

A.She was discouraging Jenny from buying it.

B.She was telling Jenny to ask her grandma for help.

C.She was reminding Jenny of its true value.

D.She was encouraging Jenny to get it by her hard work.

2.Which of the following was NOT related to the fact that Jenny could get the plastic pearl necklace?

A.She promised to work on the housework hard.

B.She was lucky to have her birthday coming near.

C.She went out with her mother to run errands.

D.She got supported from her grandma with a dollar bill.

3.The last time the father came in to read Jenny a story, why was her lip trembling?

A.She was disappointed that her father always asked for her necklace.

B.She was pleased to give the necklace to her father.

C.She was struggling in her mind about the decision to make.

D.She was unwilling to exchange her necklace for the real one.

4.Which of the following is the most suitable for the title of the story?

A.The Real Pearl Necklace B.The Parental Hidden Love

C.The Decision of Honesty D.The Choice of Luck

 

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