Question

2020年突如其来的新型冠状病毒几乎改变了所有人的生活。假定你是一名 叫李华的高中生，你所在的学校要征集一封英文感谢信, 以致敬奋战在抗击新型 冠状病毒第一线的医疗工作者。请你写一封感谢信参与投稿，内容包括： 1.表达谢意； 2.个人感受；3.表达信心。

注意：1.词数100左右：

2.以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:传染病epidemic    新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus

Dear medical workers,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear medical workers,

I am Li Hua, a high school student. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you all for your devotion in the battle against the novel coronavirus.

During this epidemic, it is you who have been devoted to rescuing those infected, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection. In the meanwhile, your efforts make us build up our confidence to defeat it.

Such few words can't fully convey our sincere thanks for your great contributions. I'm definitely convinced that with our joint efforts, China is bound to win the battle and make a quick recovery.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封感谢信。

第一步：

审题：感谢信 感谢奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒第一线的医疗工作者

人称：第一人称和第三人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分表达谢意，第二部分说明个人感受，第三部分表达信心。

要点：

1. 表达谢意：感谢医疗工作者在抗击新型冠状病毒中的奉献

2．个人感受

①尽管缺少医疗设备、有感染的风险，但他们还是尽力抢救感染的病人

②他们的努力给人们树立了信心

3．再次表示感谢，表达信心：在我们的共同努力下，一定能战胜疫情，尽快恢复正常生活

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

on behalf of ；express thanks to sb. for…；devotion；the battle against；.

rescue；infect；a shortage of ；the potential risk；build up confidence；defeat；

contribution；with joint efforts；be bound to；win the battle；make a recovery

第三步：连词成句

(1)I would like to express my sincere thanks to you all for your devotion in the battle against the novel coronavirus.

(2) You have been rescuing those who are infected.

(3) There is a shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection.

(4) Your efforts make us build up our confidence to defeat it.

(5) Such few words can't fully convey our sincere thanks for your great contributions.

(6) China is bound to win the battle and make a quick recovery.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)

用强调句型“It is ….who / that…”改写下面的句子

(2) You have been devoted to rescuing those who are infected.

→It is you who have been devoted to rescuing those infected.

用表达转折意义的词连接下面两个句子

(2) You have been devoted to rescuing those who are infected.

(3) There is the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection.

→You have been devoted to rescuing those infected although there is a shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection,

→You have been devoted to rescuing those infected despite the fact that there is a shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection.

→You have been devoted to rescuing those infected regardless of a shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection.

适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。