Question

2022年北京—张家口冬奥会将如期在北京和张家口举行。为了确保冬奥会圆满成功, 组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华, 希望能成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信, 内容包括:

1. 个人情况;

2. 自身优势;

3. 服务承诺。

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数。

参考词汇:2022北京—张家口冬奥会2022 Bejing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games

Dear Sir/ Madam,

My name is Li Hua.

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Thank you!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Sir/ Madam,

My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games. I’m a boy of eighteen years old from a high school. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. What’s more, I have other advantages—I’m especially fond of sports, familiar with Beijing, good at communication and always glad to help others. I’m willing to pro-vide the best service for every athlete in the Winter Olympic Games. Therefore, I think I’m suitable for serving the Games.

I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer.

Thank you!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，2022年北京—张家口冬奥会将如期在北京和张家口举行。为了确保冬奥会圆满成功, 组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华, 希望能成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信, 内容包括:

1. 个人情况;

2. 自身优势;

3. 服务承诺。

第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为两段。第一段，1. 个人情况;2. 自身优势;3. 服务承诺。第二段，表达期望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: work as，communicate with，be fond of, be suitable for.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:省略that的宾语从句 Therefore, I think I’m suitable for serving the Games. it做形式宾语I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:besides ,however,finally. What’s more.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。