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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

Yesterday I was walking around the park while I saw some rubbishes left on the ground. People just walk by as if they had not seen it. I thought I would do something differently. I picked up and put it into a nearby dustbin. I was felt nice because I saw someone else doing a same thing as I had just done. I thought my kindness had affected him. Saving the Earth is save us humans. It is a good lesson what we should learn in life and together we can make the Earth a good place to live one step at a time.

 

1.while→when 2.rubbishes →rubbish 3.walk→walked 4.differently→different 5.在pick后面加it 6.去掉was 7.a→the 8.save→saving 9.what→that/which 或去掉what 10.good→better 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。作者在公园看到地上有垃圾,自己把垃圾捡起来扔进垃圾桶,希望自己的行为可以影响别人。并指出拯救地球就是拯救自己。 1.考查并列连词。这是 when 用作并列连接的一个固定句型 be doing ...when, 意为“正在做......突然......”。while 作为从属连词引导时间状语从句,且从句中要用延续性动词,而作为并列连词时则表示对比转折,都不符合句意和语境。故将while改为when。 2.考查名词。rubbish 意为“垃圾”,是不可数名词。故将rubbishes 改为rubbish。 3.考查动词时态。根据时间状语 Yesterday可知,此处叙述的是过去的情况,应用一般过去时。故将walk改为walked。 4.考查形容词。形容词作后置定语修饰不定代词something,故将differently改为different。 5.考查代词。句意:我把垃圾捡起来并放入附近的垃圾箱里。pick sth. up意为“捡起……”,是固定搭配,本句代替前面的“垃圾”用it。故在pick后面加it。 6.考查动词语态。句意:看到别人也这么做让我感觉很好。本句中 feel为系动词,没有被动,所以应用主动语态。故去掉was。 7.考查冠词。the same ...as...为固定搭配,意为“与……一样……”本句引导定语从句。故将a改为the。 8.考查非谓语动词。句意:拯救地球就是拯救我们自己。分析句子可知,is(系动词)是句子的主语,save应该做表语,且与主语要保持形式上的一致,应用saving作表语。故将save改为saving。 9.考查定语从句。分析句子可知,lesson后是定语从句,先行词是a good lesson,并且关系词在定语从句中作动词learned的宾语,所以关系词应用 that/which 或省略关系词。故将what改为that/which 或去掉what。 10.考查形容词的比较级。句意:我们一起努力逐步使地球变成一个更好的可以居住的地方。根据语境,是比原来的地球更好,要用比较级,故将good改为better。  
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