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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写岀该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was so proud that I heard my team won the ice hockey competition. It made me feeling like I could achieve anything. Only three years before, I was terrified of walking or skating on ice. To deal with this, I decided to join skating club. My teacher was great but before I knew it, I was able to skate. He then persuades me to try ice hockey. I loved it and was soon practising with my local team on almost every evening. We’re now training hardly for national competitions and hope to be champion one day, but his ultimate goal is to be an ice hockey teacher and help people learn to play this game.

 

1. that→when 2. feeling→feel 3. before→ago 4.在join后面加a 5. but→and 6. persuades→persuaded 7.去掉almost前面的on 8. hardly→hard 9. champion→champions 10. his→my 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。听到获得冰球比赛冠军的消息后,作者回忆了三年前的艰苦训练过程,并希望以后能成为一名冰球老师。 1. 考查状语从句。句意:当我听说我们队赢得了冰球比赛时,我感觉如此自豪。根据句意可知,此处不是so…that…的结果状语从句,而是when引导的时间状语从句。故将that改为when。 2. 考查固定搭配。句意:它使我觉得我可以做成任何事情。make作使役动词时结构是make sb. do sth.,所以此处应用feel作宾语补足语。故将feeling改为feel。 3. 考查时间副词。句意:仅仅在三年前,我还害怕在冰上行走或溜冰。ago立足于现在,表示从现在起,若干时间之前,通常与一般过去时连用;before立足过去,表示从过去某一时刻起,若干时间以前,通常与过去完成时连用。此处是一般过去时,指 “三年前”,应用three years ago。故将before改为ago。 4. 考查冠词。club为可数名词,泛指“一个俱乐部”,skating的首字母发音是辅音,所以应加上冠词a。故在join后面加a。 5. 考查连词。句意:我的老师很好,并且在我知道之前,我已经能滑冰了。分析句意可知,前后句逻辑关系为并列关系,应用连词and连接。故将but改为and。 6. 考查时态。根据文章内容可知,这里是回忆过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。故将persuades改为persuaded。 7. 考查固定用法。由every构成的短语作时间状语时,前面不用介词,故去掉almost前面的on。 8. 考查副词。句意:我们现在为国家性比赛刻苦训练,希望有一天能成为冠军。hardly是副词,表示“几乎不”;hard作副词时意为“努力,刻苦”,此处表示“刻苦训练”,应用hard。故将hardly改为hard。 9. 考查名词单复数。由主语We和national competitions可知,此处应用复数champions。故将champion改为champions。 10. 考查代词。句意:但是我的最终目标是成为一名冰球老师,并帮助人们做这项运动。由上下文语境和逻辑关系可知,此处是 “我的” 最终目标,应用my。故将his改为my。  
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