Question

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was Saturday afternoon. Martin and his sister Pam were looking at the beautiful old buildings of Cambridge for the day. Pam had a camera with her. She likes taking photos.

“Let’s have a last photo of you,” said Pam. “It’s the last one. I want to finish the film in my camera.”

“Oh, all right,” said Martin. He stood in front of the flowers.

“Look at me.” Said Pam and took a photo. A man with a big rucksack(背包) and a tent on his back walked between Pam and Martin.

“Oh no,” said Pam. “Now I’ve got a picture of that man, not of you, Martin.”

The man looked at Pam. He was angry. He went across the road without a word.

“That man isn’t very nice, is he?” said Martin.

“No,” said Pam. The man with the rucksack on his back went into the bus station. He had got sunglasses and a blue hat.

“Come on,” said Martin. “Let’s find our bus.”

They went into the bus station. “Look,” said Martin. “There’s that man again. He’s getting into that bus. He’s going to Aberdeen. That’s in Scotland.”

“Good,” said Pam. “Far from here and far from me!”

Three days later, Pam had got her photos from the shop. “Look at these photos of us in Cambridge,” she said to Martin. “They are all very good but this last one. Look, it’s that man with the rucksack.”

“Wait a minute,” said Martin. “I know that face. It’s in the newspaper. Have you got it?”

“Today’s newspaper?” said Pam. “Yes, it’s here. Why?”

“Yes, here he is. Look at this picture,” said Martin.

Pam looked at the picture in the newspaper. “Who’s that?” she asked.

“It says in the paper that his name is Alan Rook,” said Martin. “And he works in a bank in London. But on Monday morning - no Alan Rook! The people at the bank don’t know where he is. And they say he’s got a hundred thousand pounds with him. The police are looking for him, too.”

“Come on,” said Martin. “Let’s take the photo and the newspaper to the police.”

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

    At the police station Pam and Martin met a policeman.

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Paragraph 2:

    The next day the police in Aberdeen found Alan Rook in a tent in the mountains near Aberdeen.

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Answer

At the police station Pam and Martin met a policeman. They put Pam’s photo and the newspaper on the table and they told their story. “That’s Alan Rook,” said the policeman. “The big question is - where is he now?” Pam and Martin told the policeman about the man and the bus to Aberdeen. “He’s got a rucksack and a tent on his back in the photo,” said the policeman. “He isn’t living in a hotel. He is camping. If we’re lucky, he’s still in Scotland. I must make a telephone call.”

The next day the police in Aberdeen found Alan Rook in a tent in the mountains near Aberdeen. The money from the bank was in his rucksack. The next morning Pam and Martin’s story was in all the newspapers. There was Pam’s photo of Alan Rook at the bus station. There was a picture of Martin and Pam, too. In the newspaper it said, Camera Girl Gets Photo of Rook. Police in Aberdeen Find Bank Money.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。

通过阅读所给文章可知，Martin和他的妹妹Pam在拍照片时，无意中拍到一个背着背包和帐篷的人，拿到照片后，两人认出了这个人就是警察在寻找的一名银行职员，他拿走了银行很多钱。于是两人决定带着照片和报纸去找警察。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：在警察局Pam和Martin遇到了一名警察。所以本段应该写到警察局后发生的事情，即Pam和Martin告诉警察事情的经过，比如在哪里遇到这个人，他去过什么地方、有什么特征等。第二段开头是：第二天Aberdeen的警察在Aberdeen附近的一座山上的帐篷里发现了Alan Rook。本段应该是找到Alan Rook之后发生的事情，警察找到他带走的钱，并把Pam和Martin的故事登在报纸上，并附上了他们的照片，表扬他们帮助警察追回银行丢失的钱。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。