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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was living a life in my screen but hardly noticed what was around me. I looked through news websites and checked my emails using his mobile phone. When I wake up at midnight, I did the same thing. The problem with me that I felt anxious every night. So when my friends invited me to the weekend camp with the cell service, I thought this was exact what I needed. Keep away from my phone for 48 hours changed my way of the life. I fell asleep listening to the song of frogs and insects. I listened to what my body wanted instead of that my phone was telling me to do.

 

1. but → and 2. his → my 3. wake → woke 4.在me和that之间加was 5. with → without 6. exact → exactly 7. Keep → Keeping 8. 去掉the 9. song → songs 10. that → what 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者平时总依赖手机,一次无手机的周末露营经历使作者有了全新的感觉,有了不同的人生感悟。 1. 考查连词。本句意为“我过着荧屏般的生活,并且几乎没注意到周围的一切”,前后两句表并列,应用连词and。故将but改为and。 2. 考查代词。本句意为“我浏览了新闻网站,用我的手机查看了我的电子邮件”,人称指代不一致,应用代词my。故将his改为my。 3. 考查时态。本文讲已发生的事情,谓语动词用一般过去时。故将wake改为woke。 4. 考查系动词。分析句子结构可知,本句缺乏系动词,本文讲已发生的事情,谓语动词用一般过去时,主语The problem with me是单数。故在me和that之间加was。 5. 考查介词。本句意为“所以当我的朋友邀请我参加无手机服务周末夏令营时,我想这正是我所需要的”,此处指没有手机,应用介词without。故将with改为without。 6. 考查副词。修饰句子what I needed,应用副词形式。故将exact改为exactly。 7. 考查动名词。句意:远离手机48小时改变了我的生活方式。分析句子结构可知,此处应该用动名词短语(doing)做主语。故将Keep改为Keeping。 8. 考查固定搭配。固定搭配way of life,意为“生活方式”。故去掉the。 9. 考查名词的数。frogs and insects是两种生物,是复数,所以song要用名词的复数形式。故将song改为songs。 10. 考查宾语从句引导词。本句意为“我听的是我的身体想要什么,而不是我的手机告诉我要做什么”,of后接一个宾语从句,从句缺乏宾语,意指“什么”,应用引导词what。故将that改为what。  
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3.A.reward B.puzzle C.promise D.dream

4.A.missed B.forgot C.recalled D.assessed

5.A.alone B.instead C.often D.thus

6.A.loneliness B.coldness C.generosity D.laughter

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8.A.on B.for C.with D.beyond

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10.A.loudly B.shyly C.guiltily D.artificially

11.A.hope B.advice C.assumptions D.achievements

12.A.strong B.proper C.fair D.slim

13.A.carefully B.worthily C.honestly D.fashionably

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The first concern about cloned animals is almost unnecessary due to the price of producing a clone. Making a clone needs hard work and is very costly. These clones live spoiled lives because they are very valuable, despite biologists' warning that cloned animals decrease diversity.

The second concern, about genetic modification of cloned animals, is more problematic. It may be very difficult to separate genetically modified animals from normal ones. The purpose of genetically modified cloned animals is unclear, and the FDA hasn't allowed their products onto the market, due to health concerns, but the risk of genetic pollution of healthy animals still exists.

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1.Why did the FDA allow cloned animal products for consumption?

A.They appeal to consumers very much.

B.They differ from traditional animal products.

C.They taste better than normal animal products.

D.They have been proved safe in several aspects.

2.What do we know about producing clones of animals?

A.It takes much more efforts and money. B.It provides some new medical benefits.

C.It needs less time than raising animals. D.It helps increase the diversity of animals.

3.What can be inferred from the last paragraph?

A.Cloned animals should be forbidden to enter market.

B.Cloned animals should have the same rights as humans.

C.Laws should be made to protect people's right to choose food.

D.Animal rights activists are strongly against cloned animal products.

4.What's the text mainly about?

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C.Concerns about animal cloning technology. D.Worries about cloned animal consumption.

 

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The police

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In March 2015, the percentage of female police officers stood at 28%. This compares with 22% nine years earlier in 2006. And the percentage has not always risen over this period. In fact, it peaked(顶峰)in 2010 before falling, before flatlining over the next three years.

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A.They are hard to find jobs. B.They have a wider choice of jobs.

C.They change jobs at times. D.They act better in doing man's jobs.

2.What could be the consequence of the lack of women in science?

A.It creates more jobs.

B.It leads to national chaos.

C.It influences the economic development.

D.It brings about the technological revolution.

3.What can be inferred from the studies on female police?

A.Male police are not so trustworthy as female police.

B.Female police hardly care about common incidents.

C.Female police officers are easier to communicate with.

D.The percentage of female police is always on the increase.

4.What is most likely to be discussed following the last paragraph?

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