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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语 言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错谋及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Once I came across a middle-aged man whom was accompanying his old father to the Beijing Astronomical Museum. As the old man slowly stepped out of the car, he suddenly lost his balances. But his son immediate grasped his hand and supported him before his falling. Catch hold of his son's hand, the old man breathed a deep sigh. “When you were kid, I was holding your hand to support you. Now, you are holding my hand to support mine," he said in an unhappy voice. "How time flies!" Hearing from his dad's words, the son unconsciously tighten his dad's hand. "Nothing new, Papa!" he replied softly. "Just let nature takes its course as it is or we will live a happy life."

 

1. whom→who/that 2.balances→balance 3.immediate→immediately 4.Catch→Catching 5.kid前加a 6.mine→me 7.去掉from 8.tighten→tightened 9.takes→take 10.or→and 【解析】 本文为一篇记叙文。文章记叙了我看到一位中年人带父亲去博物馆的故事。 1. 考查定语从句。句意:有一次我遇到一个中年人,他正陪着他的老父亲去北京天文博物馆。分析句子可知,本句为非限制性定语从句,先行词为a middle-aged man,为人,且在定语从句中作作主语,关系代词为who或that。故whom改为who/that。 2. 考查固定搭配。句意:当老人慢慢走出车外时,他突然失去了平衡。lose one’s balance为固定搭配,意为“失去平衡”。故balances改为balance。 3. 考查副词。句意:但是他的儿子立刻抓住他的手,在他摔倒之前扶住了他。分析句子可知,修饰动词grasp用immediate的副词形式immediately。故immediate改为immediately。 4. 考查现在分词。句意:抓住儿子的手,老人深深地叹了口气。分析句子可知,老人与抓为逻辑上的主动关系,现在分词在句中作状语。故Catch改为Catching。 5. 考查不定冠词。句意:你小时候,我牵着你的手扶着你。分析句子可知,修饰可数名词kid前需用冠词形式,且本句无特指,kid以辅音音素开头。故kid前加a。 6. 考查人称代词。句意:现在,你牵着我的手来扶着我。分析句子可知,在动词support后,人称代词用宾格形式。故mine改为me。 7. 考查及物动词。句意:听到爸爸的话,儿子不自觉地牵紧了爸爸的手。hear from意为“从……听到”,分析句子可知,本句表达听到的内容,hear意为“听到……”,表示听到的内容。故去掉from。 8. 考查时态。句意:听到爸爸的话,儿子不自觉地牵紧了爸爸的手。结合前文Once I came across a middle-aged man whom was accompanying his old father to the Beijing Astronomical Museum. 有一次我遇到一个中年人,他正陪着他的老父亲去北京天文博物馆。可知,故事发生在过去,用一般过去时,tighten用过去式。故tighten改为tightened。 9. 考查省略to的动词不定式。句意:顺其自然,我们就会过上幸福的生活。分析句子可知,在使让动词let后,动词用原形。let sb/sth do sth。故takes改为take。 10. 考查连词。句意:顺其自然,我们就会过上幸福的生活。前文描述Just let nature takes its course as it is顺其自然,后文we will live a happy life. 我们就会过上幸福的生活,前后文为顺承关系,and表顺承,并列。故or改为and。  
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C.by making comparisons D.by listing numbers

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