Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

On the afternoon of May 25th, a charity sale held by the Students’ Union on our school playground. In order to keep everything organized, we made fully preparations. Before the sale, from the student we collected various used books and second-hand goods which were still in a good condition. Then we classify them. When the day came, students and teachers both came and took an active part in it. In the end of the activity, we raised 5000 yuan in total. All the money which we raised will be sent to the students from poor families in our school to help finishing their studies. It’s such meaningful an activity that students are all looking forward to the next charity sale.

Answer

1.held前加was

2.fully→full

3.student→students

4.去掉in后的a

5.classify→classifed

6.both→all

7.In→At

8.which→that

9.finishing→finish

10.such→so

【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述学校学生会组织的一次慈善销售活动，筹集资金给贫困学生。

1. 考查动词时态及语态。held作谓语动词，与主语a charity sale是被动关系，用被动语态，根据时间状语On the afternoon of May 25th可知，时态用一般过去时，且主语是第三人称单数。故held前加was。

2. 考查形容词。修饰名词preparations，用形容词。故将fully改为full。

3. 考查名词复数。句意：在销售之前，我们从学生那里收集了各种旧书和二手物品，这些物品仍然处于良好的状态。根据句意，此处指不止一个学生，故用复数。故将student改为students。

4. 考查冠词和固定短语。in good condition“情况良好；状态良好”是固定短语。故去掉in后的a。

5. 考查动词时态。文章讲述过去发生的事情，用一般过去时。故将classify改为classified。

6. 考查代词。此处指代students and teachers，指代三者或三者以上用不定代词all，both指代两者。故将both改为all。

7. 考查介词和固定短语。at the end of...“在……结束时”是固定短语，in the end“最后；终于”是固定短语，此处表示“在活动结束时”。故将In改为At。

8. 考查定语从句。先行词由all修饰，指物，从句中做主语，用关系代词that，不用which。故将which改为that。

9. 考查非谓语动词。help后接动词不定式作宾语，to可以省略。故将finishing改为finish。

10. 考查副词。修饰形容词meaningful用副词做状语，such“如此的”是形容词，修饰名词，so“如此”是副词，修饰形容词做状语。故将such改为so。