Question

假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Alice来信说她因为要参加一次重要考试,最近出现了头晕、睡眠不好的焦虑症状。请根据以下要点,给她写一封书信提一些建议。

信的内容应包括下列要点:

1.正确认识考试;

2.积极为考试做准备;

3.注意劳逸结合(例如:运动、睡眠等)。

注意:

1.词数为100左右;

2.不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;

3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)。

Dear Alice,

I have received your letter saying that you are anxious about the coming exam.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Alice,

I have received your letter saying that you are anxious about the coming exam.

In my opinion, it’s important for you to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how you are getting along with your studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. You should study hard every day and make good preparations for exams. In this way you can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.

Besides, you’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise so that you can keep yourself relaxed and then concentrate yourself on exams. What’s more, having enough sleep can make you energetic and enable you to perform well in an exam.

I wish you success in the exam.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Alice来信说她因为要参加一次重要考试,最近出现了头晕、睡眠不好的焦虑症状。请根据以下要点,给她写一封书信提一些建议。

信的内容应包括下列要点:

1.正确认识考试

2.积极为考试做准备

3.注意劳逸结合(例如:运动、睡眠等)

第二，人称为第一人称、第二人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段，收到了Alice的信，获知Alice对即将到来的考试感到焦虑。第二段，正确认识考试;

积极为考试做准备。第三段，注意劳逸结合(例如:运动、睡眠等)。第四段，表达希望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:be anxious about, get along with ,make good preparations for,

suffer from ,keep yourself relaxed and then concentrate yourself on exams.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:it做形式主语In my opinion, it’s important for you to have a right attitude towards exams.so that引导的目的状语从句 Besides, you’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise so that you can keep yourself relaxed and then concentrate yourself on exams.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: In my opinion，Besides，What’s more.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。