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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One evening after work, I found a beautiful little fox with a injured leg. He was like a Disney fox. Then I feed her some fish. A couple of weeks later, the fox was back, much better and had visited ever since. She was comfortable enough to come really close me. She allowed me to take photo of her, the best of whom I posted on social media. Soon after, she took her cubs together to visit to me, which was really unexpected. It's amazing to have this connection with something so wildly in this busy city, but happily the loving fox still keeps turning up.

 

1. a→an 2. He →She 3. feed→fed 4. had→has 5. close后加to 6. photo→photos 7. whom→which 8. visit 后to 去掉 9. wildly→wild 10. but→and 【解析】 本文一篇记叙文。作者在某个晚上下班之后救了一只腿受伤的小狐狸,从此以后与这只小狐狸结下了不解之缘。 第一处:考查不定冠词。injured为元音开头,前面应该用an而不是a。故将a改成an。 第二处:考查人称代词。根据后文的“Then I feed her some fish.”和“She was comfortable enough to come really close me. She allowed me to take photo of her, the best of whom I posted on social media.”等处可知这只狐狸是母狐狸,所以应该用she而不是he指代这只狐狸。故将He改成She。 第三处:考查时态。作者给狐狸喂食物这件事发生在过去,所以要用一般过去时,故将feed改成fed。 第四处:考查时态。句意:然后我喂了她一些鱼。几个星期后,狐狸回来了,(状态)好多了,(她)从那以后就一直来这里。根据时间状语ever since可知此处要用现在完成时而不是过去完成时,故将had改成has。 第五处:考查介词。句意:她很舒服地靠近了我。根据句意这里要表达的是“靠近我”,close作形容词表示“接近的,进的”时且后面要接人或某物时,要与介词to搭配使用,故在close后加to。 第六处:考查名词单复数。photo是可数名词,根据后文“the best of whom I posted on social media”可知作者要把拍得最好的照片上传到社交媒体上,这说明作者不止拍了一张照片,此处要用photo的复数形式,故将photo改成photos。 第七处:考查非限定性定语从句。分析可知“the best of whom I posted on social media是非限定性定语从句,先行词photos指物,引导词在从句中做介词of的宾语,应该用which而不是whom引导这个定语从句。故将whom改成which。 第八处:考查及物动词。句意:不久之后,她带着她的幼崽一起来看我,这真是出乎意料。visit表 “拜访,看望”之意时为及物动词,后面直接接宾语,不需要介词to。故将visit后的to去掉。 第九处:考查形容词。修饰不定代词something要用形容词,故将wildly改成wild。 第十处:考查连词。句意:在这个繁忙的城市里,能与如此野生的事物有这样的联系,真是太棒了,而且令人高兴的是,这只可爱的狐狸还在不断出现。前后文为并列关系,不是转折关系。故将but改成and。
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Citizens from just 7 out of 23 countries and regions rate their governments’3. (measure) as broadly positive, 4. (base) on the “Global Crisis Perceptions” index. The research, 5. surveyed approximately 12,500 people across 23 countries and regions between April 3 and 19, 6. (ask) respondents to rate their countries and regions across four key indicators: political leadership, corporate leadership, community and media.

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9. is surprising is that only one Western country New Zealand (56) scored higher than the global average of 45. Australia, the US, and all four western 10.  (Europe) countries surveyed — Germany, the UK, Italy and France — all ranked below the global average.

 

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Earlier this year, “Three Wishes” became a nonprofit and launched its ___nationwide chapter. Ruby Kate doesn't plan to stop here. “I consider __to be my hobby,” she says, “and I'm very good at it and I would like to pass this kind act on.”

1.A.sharing B.raising C.answering D.consulting

2.A.leaves out B.goes on C.sets out D.turns down

3.A.poor B.sick C.old D.young

4.A.gets on B.races down C.comes up D.tails along

5.A.sorrowfully B.optimistically C.hopefully D.firmly

6.A.nurse B.owner C.folk D.resident

 

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10.A.collected B.own C.ease D.borrowed

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12.A.relief B.sympathy C.donation D.assistance

13.A.sensitively B.seriously C.spiritually D.enthusiastically

14.A.changed B.set C.failed D.hit

15.A.question B.story C.website D.collection

16.A.obviously B.hardly C.consequently D.finally

17.A.excited B.devoted C.creative D.curious

18.A.stocked B.emptied C.sold D.bought

19.A.final B.first C.former D.continuous

20.A.kindness B.virtue C.treasure D.power

 

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As soon as you feel a cold coming on, drink plenty of liquid. Water or juice is ideal but hot herbal teas with lemon will help thin sticky substance and remove it from the body. A warm gargle with salt water will make your throat more comfortable by reducing the swelling. 2.

3. Breathing in steam over a bowl of hot water helps a lot, too. For a violent cough, the latest research suggests that honey, either straight from a jar or mixed with a hot drink, works as well if not better than costly sprays.

A good diet is also essential for a quick recovery, so start the day with a healthy breakfast including vitamin C in the form of fresh fruit. 4. For dinner, easily digested solid food is recommended, such as rice porridge made with vegetables or eggs.

5. It not only makes you physically stronger, but enhances your emotional well-being. Just remember not to attempt anything that requires a lot of effort or strength. Finally, to recharge your body and regain your strength, you need a full eight hours' sleep.

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C.The name “cold" came into use in the 16th century due to cold weather.

D.The warm air generated by a hot shower or bath will help clear blocked noses.

E.Signs and symptoms may appear less than two days after exposure to the virus.

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But this doesn’t mean moss walls will necessarily protect people from pollution. In the Netherlands, researchers found that eight walls installed in Amsterdam failed to reduce the concentration of particulate matter (PM) and nitrogen dioxide (N02). Their report concluded that even doubling the number of moss walls would do little to improve their effectiveness.

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1.What do we know about the CityTree?

A.It can absorb some air pollutants. B.It can irrigate other street plants.

C.It produces electricity to cool water. D.It is aimed at saving water in cities.

2.What is Paragraph 3 mainly about?

A.The importance of CityTree.

B.The function of CityTree.

C.How to operate CityTree.

D.Where to place CityTree.

3.Why is the example of Amsterdam mentioned in Paragraph 4?

A.To show that CityTree can’t always work well.

B.To prove that CityTree can reduce air pollutants.

C.To emphasize the necessity of building moss walls.

D.To analyze the reasons for the failure of the program.

4.What is the author’s attitude towards replacing street trees with moss walls?

A.Ambiguous. B.Disapproving.

C.Supportive. D.Cautious.

 

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Now, Harvard researchers, Samuer Mehr and Manvir Singh, have found further evidence to support the argument. They gathered music from different countries, media and time periods, and collected descriptions of many different pieces of music. Rather than focusing on music first and then looking at where it could be found, they started by studying a record of detailed descriptions of more than three hundred known global societies, and found that all of them have music as part of their culture.

To see if people could recognize the functions of songs from around the world, the researchers also created a listening experiment in which people tried to guess the behavioral context of a song. This went surprisingly well. Particularly music that was intended for dancing or to calm a baby were easy to recognize as either dance music or lullabies. Love songs were a bit more difficult to qualify, because they tend to be very diverse even within cultures.

This systematic study of connections sounds like the way that researchers in other fields would study biological patterns. “There’s a field known as cultural phylogenetics,” says Singh. Whereas biological characteristics are only received from parent to child, cultural characteristics (like music) are also shared between people of the same generation. That makes it much more difficult to figure out where the characteristic has come from.

“Finally,” Singh says, “We still don’t know why music developed gradually. Our study shows that humans everywhere share cognitive mechanisms (认知机制) that make certain sounds seem appropriate in particular contexts.”

1.What does the underlined word “it” in paragraph 1 refer to?

A.The fact that music is part of every culture.

B.The question whether music is widely spread.

C.The doubt whether further research has been done.

D.The idea that Africa and the Arctic have cool music.

2.What did Mehr and Singh do first?

A.They found out further evidence. B.They studied various societies.

C.They sought the origins of music. D.They focused mainly on music.

3.What’s the purpose of the listening experiment?

A.To comfort a baby. B.To pick out love songs.

C.To create a context. D.To tell functions of songs.

4.What is the main idea of the text?

A.Music shapes societies in different cultures.

B.Global music shares common characteristics.

C.Musical systems display cultural differences.

D.Multi-culture is based on biological patterns.

 

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