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假设你是李华,你的叔叔最近因为吸烟而得了肺病。请你根据以下要点提示给他写一封信劝...

假设你是李华,你的叔叔最近因为吸烟而得了肺病。请你根据以下要点提示给他写一封信劝他戒烟。

1. 想吸烟的时候,可以试着喝些水或吃些健康的小吃;

2. 远离平时经常一起吸烟的朋友。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Uncle

I am sorry to know that...

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Li Hua

 

Dear Uncle, I'm sorry to know that you are ill. We all know smoking does great harm to our health, and I think you'd better give up smoking as soon as possible. Firstly, whenever you want to smoke, try drinking some water or eating some healthy snacks. Secondly, maybe you have some friends who often smoke with you. Stay away from them. My father used to smoke heavily and once had a serious lung disease, but now he has given up smoking and is living a healthy life. So give up smoking right now. I hope you will do it! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信劝得了肺病的叔叔戒烟。 第一步: 审题 体裁: 应用文 时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构: 总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要点: 1.想吸烟的时候,可以试着喝些水或吃些健康的小吃。 2. 远离平时经常一起吸烟的朋友。 第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组) do great harm to;give up;as soon as possible;look forward to 第三步: 连词成句 I'm sorry to know that you are ill. We all know smoking does great harm to our health, and I think you'd better give up smoking as soon as possible. Firstly, whenever you want to smoke, try drinking some water or eating some healthy snacks. Secondly, maybe you have some friends who often smoke with you. My father used to smoke heavily and once had a serious lung disease, but now he has given up smoking and is living a healthy life. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second,And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including, 3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/ doing,On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 第五步: 润色修改
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Like most of my schoolmates, I have either brothers nor sisters; in another words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at familythey want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subjects. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat her as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other homesI wonder.

 

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阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

Think about the different ways that people use the wind. You can use it to fly a kite 1. to sail a boat Wind is one of our cleanest and 2. (rich) power sources, as well as one of the oldest. Evidence shows that windmills (风车) 3. (begin) to be used in ancient Iran back in 4. seventh century BC. They were first 5. (introduce) to Europe during the 1100s, when armies returned from the Middle East with knowledge of 6. (use) wind power.

For many 7. (century), people used windmills to grind (磨碎) wheat into flour or pump water from deep underground. 8. electricity was discovered in the late 1800s, people living in remote areas began to use 9. (they) to produce electricity. This allowed them to have electric lights and radio. Today, there is a 10. (globe) movement to supply more and more of our electricity through the use of wind.

 

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    China's giant pandas show the achievement of the international effort to save animals that are now in danger. In television programs we often see pandas _______ funny games. Children have panda toys and beautiful cards with pictures of lovely_______ in them. They often visit the giant pandas in the zoo in _______ holidays and have a good time there. Howeverscientists are worried about the _______ of giant pandas. They know only about 1000 giant pandas remain _______today.They think the giant panda will die out in 30 years if the present conditions are not _______.

It is reported that the giant pandas have a very _______ birthrate. About 115 pandas live in the zoo and research centres mainly in Chinabut during the past 10 years they _______ only 34 _______ pandas that are still alive. The survival rate for giant pandas in the wild is probably the same or lower.

There are several reasons for the low ________.The main reason is________ male pandas can make babies with females in a very ________ season—only a few days a year. When they do have babiesfemales often produce two pandasbut the mother is usually not able to care for ________ of them. The newborn pandas ________ only a few kilograms each. They are too weak to live without special care. In the zooscientists can help the mothers ________ the young pandas but those living in the wild do not get enough ________.It is very difficult for mother pandas to bring up their young pandas.

Conditions for the giant pandas have been worse in recent years. Pandas in China continue to ________in number. We know pandas live on bamboos. But sometimes all the bamboos in one area die. The pandas there have ________ to eat and die of hunger.

Giant pandas now live in 13 separate ________areas in China. Several years ago the Chinese government and the International Wild Life Organization agreed ________ a project of protecting giant pandas in the wild. We hope it could be helpful.

1.A.play B.playing C.do D.done

2.A.pandas B.children C.bamboos D.zoos

3.A.our B.their C.your D.the

4.A.past B.now C.future D.present

5.A.live B.living C.lively D.alive

6.A.changed B.increased C.improved D.considered

7.A.low B.proper C.high D.right

8.A.cloned B.produced C.kept D.made

9.A.small B.young C.old D.adult

10.A.price B.speed C.birthrate D.limit

11.A.why B.how C.when D.that

12.A.short B.long C.suitable D.certain

13.A.all B.both C.none D.neither

14.A.weight B.heavy C.weigh D.heaviness

15.A.have B.raise C.bring up D.care for

16.A.help B.food C.water D.milk

17.A.reduce B.grow C.rise D.change

18.A.something B.nothing C.everything D.anything

19.A.protected B.protecting C.defending D.guarding

20.A.with B.to C.on D.that

 

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    It seems that there is never enough time in the day. But, since we all get the same 24 hours, why is it that some people achieve much more than others? 1.

Keep 0a to-do list.

You should have a reminder system to tell you when you need to do what. 2. Carry a pen and paper wherever you go and write down the things you need to do, including dates and deadlines (最后期限).

Set goals.

Set yourself exact goals, and make sure that they are realistic. To do this, you first need to examine your present situation and assess (判断) which goals are important to you. Have a secondary route to your goals in case you have to change your plans.

Break down tasks.

Break goals down into different parts so that you can complete them one step at a time. 3. Try to complete one task before you go on to the next.

Organize your time.

4. A good way to do this is to record everything you do for a week in detail and then examine your record to see how you use or waste your time.

5.

Keep your work space tidy so that you can work efficiently — it’s hard to work if things you need to find are buried under a pile of paper! Work to plan things so that you can meet deadlines in good time — don’t leave everything until the last minute.

A.Make a detailed plan.

B.Develop a regular work order.

C.The answer lies in good time management.

D.The best time to do something is usually NOW.

E.Don’t try to remember everything in your head.

F.Find areas of your life where you are wasting time and try to reduce them.

G.Write these steps clown, and try to be as detailed as you can when you do this.

 

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    Do you love holidays but hate the increase weight that follows? You are not alone.

Holidays are happy days with pleasure and delicious foods. Many people, however, are worried about the weight that comes along with the delicious foods.

With proper planning, though, it is possible to control your weight. The idea is to enjoy the holidays but not to eat too much. You don’t have to turn away from the foods that you enjoy. The following suggestions may be of some help to you.

Do not miss meals. Before you leave home for a feast, have a small, low-fat snack. This may help to keep you from getting too excited before delicious foods.

Begin with clear soup, fruit or vegetables. A large glass of water before you eat may help you feel full. Use a small plate; a large plate will encourage you to have more than enough.

Better not have high-fat foods. Dishes that look oily or creamy have much fat in them.

Choose lean meat. Fill your plate with salad and green vegetables.

If you have a sweet tooth, try mints and fruit. They don’t have fat content as cream and chocolate.

Don’t let exercise take a break during the holidays. A 20-minute walk after a meal can help burn off excess calories.

1.Holidays are happy days with pleasure but they may ________.

A.bring weight problems

B.bring you much trouble in your life

C.make you worry about your foods

D.make you hate delicious foods

2.In order to really enjoy your holidays without putting on weight, you’d better ________.

A.drink much water and have vegetables only

B.not eat much food in high fat

C.not accept invitations to feasts

D.turn away from delicious foods

3.According to the passage, ________ is a necessary part to stop you from putting on weight.

A.clear soup B.water

C.calories of energy D.physical exercise

4.Many people can’t help putting on weight after the holidays because they ________.

A.can’t control themselves

B.go to too many feasts

C.enjoy delicious foods

D.can’t help turning away from the foods

 

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