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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号() 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Three years ago I fail in an important exam in my life and became the student in an ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poor equipment, I found the teachers patiently. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided make the best of it. I worked hard but got along well with my teachers and classmate. Whenever I had difficulties, you were always available. Soon I became one of the most best students in my class.

My experience tells me that it’s not what you are given but how you make use of it which determines who you are.

 

第一处: fail→failed 第二处: the→a 第三处: Disappointing→Disappointed 第四处: patiently→patient 第五处: decided后面加to 第六处: but→and 第七处: classmate→classmates 第八处: you→they 第九处: 去掉most 第十处: which→that 【解析】 这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。文章作者通过自己的亲身经历说明了不是你被给予了什么,而是你如何利用它,决定了你是谁。 第一处:考查时态。句意:三年前,我在一次重要的考试中失败了,成为了一名普通学校的学生。根据Three years ago,可知是发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时,所以fail改成failed。 第二处:考查冠词。句意:三年前,我在一次重要的考试中失败了,成为了普通学校的一名学生。泛指“一名学生”,student的首字母发音是辅音,所以用不定冠词a,所以the改成a。 第三处:考查形容词。句意:虽然我对破旧的校园和简陋的设备感到失望,但我发现老师们很有耐心。v+ing修饰物,v+ed修饰人,这里修饰人,所以Disappointing改成Disappointed。 第四处:考查形容词。句意:虽然我对破旧的校园和简陋的设备感到失望,但我发现老师们很有耐心。find sb/sth +形容词,形容词作宾语补足语。所以patiently改成 patient。 第五处:考查固定短语。句意:我决定充分利用它。decide to do sth. 决定做某事,该句型是固定短语,所以decided后面加to。 第六处:考查连词。句意:我工作努力,并且与我的老师和同学们相处得很好。文中表示并列关系,所以but改成and。 第七处:考查名词单复数。句意:我工作努力,并且与我的老师和同学们相处得很好。“我的同学们”是复数意义,用名词复数,所以classmate改成classmates。 第八处:考查代词。句意:每当我有困难时,他们总是在我身边。文中表示“他们”,所以you改成they。 第九处:考查最高级。句意:很快,我就成为了班里最好的学生之一。best已经是最高级,所以去掉most。 第十处:考查强调句。句意:我的经验告诉我,不是你被给予了什么,而是你如何利用它,决定了你是谁。这里含有一个强调句,强调句的基本结构是it is / was + 被强调部分 + that + 句子的其他成分,所以which改成that。
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18.A.solved B.answered C.promised D.considered

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