Question

现在越来越多的人选择走出国门旅行。但有些人在享受国外旅行时表现出一些不文明行为，这引起了社会的广泛关注。为此，某英文报社正在展开以“文明旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请你给报社写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：

1.尊重当地的风俗习惯; 2.不高声喧哗; 3.其它

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Editor,

I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling.

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I would appreciate it if my suggestions were accepted.

                                                                                                                                                               Yours,

                                                                                                                                                   Lihua

Answer

Dear Editor,

I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling. I’m writing to say something about it. Every year, a great number of tourists go out for sightseeing and relaxation during holidays. While enjoying themselves, some people behave rudely, which really astonished me. Since many people have arranged their journey for the Spring Festival, we should take some measures to remind people of the impolite behavior and improve it.

The first thing we need to take into consideration is that we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries.

More importantly, if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.

I would appreciate it if my suggestions were accepted.

Yours,

Lihua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封信：现在越来越多的人选择走出国门旅行。但有些人在享受国外旅行时表现出一些不文明行为，这引起了社会的广泛关注。为此，某英文报社正在展开以“文明旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请你给报社写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：1.尊重当地的风俗习惯; 2. 不高声喧哗; 3.其它。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； behave（行为举止），unacceptable（不可接受的），sightseeing（观光），relaxation（放松），impolite（不礼貌的），respect （尊重），disturbance （打扰），public places（公共场所），loudly（大声地），queue jumping（插队），local customs（当地习俗）及represent（代表）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。