假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分.
As a typical student of Senior 3, I devote most time to learn each day, with different subject to study and lots of homework to do. In my spare time, I love watching TikTok videos, that are really amusing and always make me feel relaxed.
TikTok, also know as Douyin in China, allows users share 15﹣second videos. It is extremely popular and offer people a chance to show their talents. Many people have become the big stars since we shared videos on TikTok. I will also share funny videos in the future. Therefore, I've never thought of becoming famous. Instead, I just want to make others happily.
阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
Lijiang Ancient Wall Painting is a special culture and art1.(absorb) the culture of other nationalities. These wall paintings 2. (find) in tens of temples of minority villages in Lijiang County, Yunnan Province. Baisha Town, Yunnan, is the place 3. the most people of Naxi nationality live in. The wall painting of the Big Baoji Palace in the town of Baisha 4.(be) considered to be the center of the Lijiang Ancient Wall Painting and it was well preserved.
There are the 5.(language) of Han and Tibetan (藏语) on the walls of the palace. There is a large painting, 6.(paint) with 118 statues. In the late Ming Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty, people found that each ancient wall painting melts many different kinds of figures from different nationalities. The painters are 7.(most) from Naxi nationality. However, the making level cannot reach 8. formerwall paintings.
The value of the Lijiang Ancient Wall Painting is from the artists of Han, Tibet, and Naxi nationalities, which reflected the 9.(society) life of Naxi nationality. Nowadays a lot of people10. all over the world are attracted to the Lijiang Ancient Wall Painting every year.
Every Friday and Saturday night I deliver food for a local food delivery company. I need this second job to pay off the _______ that resulted from an accident a few years ago.
Last night I got a(n) _______ in which the restaurant and the customer's house were pretty far away from each other. This was actually a _______ thing. The customer got charged a higher delivery fee, which would be paid to me.
I _______ the customer's food and drove to his house. Though I used Google Maps, I still had problems_______ his house. I called the customer and he told me that the address on the order was _______. When I knew this, I became very _______. By this time I had already _______ half an hour on this order. What's more, I had_______ another order which got reassigned (再分配) to another person during the time.
Another 30 minutes later I got to the customer's door. I ________ him to be in a bad mood because his delivery had taken so long. ________ I was greeted by a very pleasant customer. He________ to me that his wife's eyesight was not that great so she had put in the wrong address in the order ________, so the whole thing was their ________
Knowing the________, I didn't complain to the customer. I________ my anger towards the couple. But he said he felt so ________ for me and decided to give me an additional $30 cash for my ________. I knew I needed money, but I also knew forgiving was a virtue. So I ________
Later the company ________ me for what I had done and I was given an extra amount of money as a reward. You can't imagine how happy I was!
1.A.debt B.ticket C.product D.tax
2.A.form B.reply C.order D.position
3.A.clear B.difficult C.dull D.good
4.A.picked up B.cut up C.paid for D.waited for
5.A.fixing B.finding C.designing D.judging
6.A.common B.strange C.wrong D.secret
7.A.worried B.relieved C.nervous D.angry
8.A.got B.saved C.enjoyed D.wasted
9.A.lost B.finished C.signed D.forgotten
10.A.needed B.wanted C.expected D.proved
11.A.Anyhow B.Besides C.Therefore D.However
12.A.admitted B.explained C.complained D.suggested
13.A.in return B.with pleasure C.by accident D.on purpose
14.A.excuse B.fault C.choice D.request
15.A.truth B.goal C.decision D.opinion
16.A.understood B.regretted C.expressed D.canceled
17.A.anxious B.ashamed C.sorry D.afraid
18.A.trouble B.courage C.progress D.patience
19.A.changed B.refused C.accepted D.agreed
20.A.employed B.fired C.charged D.praised
Your comfort zone is a behavioral space where your activities and behaviors fit a routine and pattern that minimizes stress and risk.1.You benefit in obvious ways: regular happiness, low anxiety, and reduced stress.
Leaving your comfort zone can have very positive results, though. For one thing, you'll surely be more productive if you're willing to move out of it. With the sense of unease that comes from having deadlines and expectations, you'll have the drive and ambition to do more and learn new things.2.For another, learning to live outside your comfort zone can prepare you for life changes that force you out of it. Fear and uncertainty always exist in our life. By challenging yourself to things you normally wouldn't do, you can experience some of that uncertainty in a controlled and manageable environment.
While outside your comfort zone can be a good place to be,3.. You can start by doing everyday things differently. For example, you can take a different route to work or try a new restaurant. Besides, you should remember to break out in small steps. You get the same benefits whether you go with long strides (大步) or you start slow. If you're socially anxious, don't suppose you have to gather the courage to ask your crush (爱慕之人) on a date right away.
4. Identify your fears, and then face them step by step.
Trying new things is difficult, so it's important to understand how habits form and how we can break them.5.
A.It provides a state of mental security.
B.it's of great necessity to find ways to break out of it
C.it's a pleasant experience to stay in the comfort zone
D.You have to manage that stress and risk in a clever way.
E.Just say hello to them and see where you can go from there.
F.That means you will get more done and find smarter ways to work.
G.And it's as important to press yourself out of your comfort zone by doing specific things.
Mark and his brother Jason both were looking at the shining new computer enviously. Jason was determined not to go against their father’s wishes but Mark was more adventurous than his brother. He loves experimenting and his aim was to become a scientist like his father.
“Dad will be really mad if he finds out you’ve been playing with his new computer” Jason said, “He told us not to touch it.”
“He won’t find out,” Mark said, “I’ll just have a quick look and shut it down.”
Mark had been scolded before for touching his father’s equipment. But his curiosity was difficult to control and this new computer really puzzled him.
It was a strange-looking machine — one his dad had brought home from the laboratory where he worked. “It’s an experimental model,” his father had explained, so don’t touch it under any circumstances.” But his father’s warning only served to make Mark more curious. Without any further thought, Mark turned on the power switch. The computer burst into life and seconds later, the screen turned into colours, shifting and changing, and then two big white words appeared in the centre of the screen: “SPACE TRANSPORTER.”
“Yes!” Mark cried excitedly, “It’s a computer game. I knew it! Dad’s only been pretending to work. He’s really been playing games instead!” A new message appeared on the screen:
“ENTER NAMES
VOYAGE 1
VOYAGE 2
Mark’s finger flew across the keyboard as he typed in both of their names.
“INPUT ACCEPTED.
START TRANSPORT PROGRAM.
__________________
The screen turn even brighter and a noise suddenly rose in volume.
“I think we’d better shut it off, Mark,” Jason yelled out in terror, reaching for the power switch. A beam(光束) of dazzling white light burst out of the computer screen, wrapping the boys in its glow(光芒),until they themselves seemed to be glowing. Then it died down just as suddenly as it had burst into life. And the boys were no longer there. On the screen, the letters changed:
“TRANSPORT SUCCESSFUL.
DESTINATION: MARS.
RETRIEVE DATE: 2025
1.Why did Mark touch the computer against his father’s warning?
A. He wanted to take a voyage.
B. He wanted to practice his skills.
C. He was so much attracted by it.
D. He was eager to do an experiment.
2.Where did the boy’s father most likely work?
A. In an electronic factory.
B. In a computer company.
C. In a scientific research center.
D. In an information processing center.
3.Mark thought “SPACE TRANSPORTER” on the screen was the name of ________.
A. a computer game B. a company website
C. a software producer D. an astronomy program
4.Why did Jason want to shut off the computer?
A. He was afraid of being scolded.
B. He didn’t like the loud noise and light.
C. He didn’t want to play games.
D. He was afraid something dangerous might happen.
5.What happened to the boys at the end of the story?
A. They were blown into the air.
B. They were sent to another planet.
C. They were hidden in the strong light.
D. They were carried away to another country.
Howard Weistling wanted to be a comic strip (连环漫画) artist. But when the Japanese bombed Pearl Harbor, he joined the Army.
After flight engineer training, Howard was shipped off to Europe. On his maiden flight, his plane was shot down over Austria. The entire crew of eight men landed safely. But a farmer found Howard hiding in his barn and turned him over to a prison of war camp in Barth, Germany. It was freezing and the men almost starved to death eating the guards' garbage.
Hungry and homesick Howard coped the only way he knew how. He drew a comic strip. The book, made of cigarette wrappers bound together with scrap metal, was sent around the camp. Every couple of days he would add a new panel. One panel at a time would be passed around the whole camp. And they'd have something to look forward to.
After an entire year of this, they woke one morning to find their guards gone. They fled and Howard finally got to go home. Just lucky to get out alive, he left the book behind.
Back home in California, Howard soon had a wife and kids to feed so he had to set aside his dream of becoming an artist. He took a job as a gardener instead.
Morgan shared his father's artistic gifts. At 15 his parents sent him to art school. And Howard got to see his son become a well﹣known painter before he died in 2002. That's how, seven decades after the war, when a stranger in New York googled the name "Weistling," he found Morgan online.
"I get an email from a gentleman and he says, ‘I think I may have some drawings your father did when he was a POW (prisoner of war) in World War II,'" Morgan recalls. "‘Would you like them?' And I just stared at that email and started crying."
Luckily Howard had engraved his name on the comic book, which is how the man from New York City had connected with Morgan. A couple of days later when it arrived in California, Morgan couldn't believe it. "It was like getting my father back," Morgan says. "It was like him being able to tell me the story over again ﹣ only this time it was real in my hands."
1.The passage details Howard's life as a POW to show that .
A.war cannot stop his pursuit of success.
B.passion for art helped ease his sufferings.
C.loss of freedom encouraged his creativity.
D.misery drives him to fight against his fate.
2.What can we infer about Howard's comic strip in prison?
A.It satisfied prisoners' curiosity.
B.It aroused the guards' sympathy.
C.It was popular among the prisoners.
D.It raised prisoners' confidence in freedom.
3.What contributes to the stranger's success in finding Morgan?
A.The email from a gentleman.
B.Howard's experience in the war.
C.Morgan's recalling of his father.
D.Morgan's status in the field of art.
4.What can we infer about Morgan from the last paragraph?
A.He didn't believe the stranger's story.
B.He was excited to get the comic strip.
C.He couldn't wait to tell others his good news.
D.He hadn't heard about his father's war stories.