Question

假定你是李华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据以下要点用英语给他写封信：

1.帮他分析原因：害羞，怕同学取笑等等；

2.给他提出建议：学习普通话，和同学交流意见等等；

3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Ming，

I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along well with the new class.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Li Ming,

I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along well with the new class. One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent.

I am sure, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. In my opinion, learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends. In your spare time, you should play basketball or go to some parties. At last, I suggest that you should communicate with others confidently. As for me, I’ll encourage more students to study and play with you. Also, I’ll help you with your study and daily life. In a word, I’m ready to help you whenever you turn to me for help.

I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给转学生李明写一封信，针对他一时无法融入新班级的苦恼给出一些建议。

第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生给转学生李明写一封信，针对他一时无法融入新班级的苦恼给出一些建议。题目要求写作内容应包括以下三条要点：1. 帮他分析原因：害羞，怕同学取笑等等；2. 给他提出建议：学习普通话，和同学交流意见等等；3. 陈述你帮助他的具体打算。因此，可将写作分成三段。第一段：说明写信目的，分析问题原因。第二段：提出建议：学习普通话，和同学交流意见等等；陈述帮助他的具体打算。第三段：结束语，表达祝愿。

第二步：列关键词。如：have trouble in doing sth.，along well with，too···to，make fun of，manage to，communicate with，encourage sb. to do sth.，turn to sb. for help等。

第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。

第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：In my opinion，At last，Also等。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。