Question

假设你是学生会主席李华，英国某中学代表团应你校邀请将于寒假进行参观访问。请你写封邮件，将本次安排告知该访问团负责人Mr. Smith，并征询他的意见。活动安排：

1.参观文化长廊；

2.品尝特色午餐；

3.观看文艺表演。

注意：1.词数100词左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：cultural corridor文化长廊

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Answer

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am Li Hua, president of the Students’ Union of our school. I’m very pleased to learn that you will be visiting our school. Here I’d like to tell you what we have arranged for your visit. In the morning, we will show you around our cultural corridor where pictures and art works about Chinese culture are exhibited. At noon, we will invite you to taste the local foods, a good opportunity for you to get some ideas of the local customs and to know each other. If you like, the art performance presenting Chinese culture will be shown to you. We are eager to know if you are content with the arrangements.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本文为提纲类应用文写作。将参观活动的详细计划告诉负责人Mr. Smith，并征询他的意见。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

写作要求：

活动安排：1.参观文化长廊；

2.品尝特色午餐；

3.观看文艺表演。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

arrange; cultural corridor; exhibit; art performance; be content with；

第三步：连词成句

1. Here I’d like to tell you what we have arranged for your visit.

2. In the morning, we will show you around our cultural corridor where pictures and art works about Chinese culture are exhibited.

3. If you like, the art performance presenting Chinese culture will be shown to you.

4. We are eager to know if you are content with the arrangements.

在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题.

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1. 文章的结构顺序：了解基本情况；具体活动安排；征求意见。

2. 过渡词和连接词：and; in the morning; at noon;

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰

第五步：修改润色