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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In our daily life, we unavoidably come across various challenge now and then.

For me, the biggest challenge happens when I entered senior high school. I was shocking to find the physics teacher was teaching was totally beyond me. Thinking I just lacked a gift for physics, I stopped to making an effort and my grades were poor. Unfortunately, my teacher didn’t give up on me. Instead, he helped me analyse a problem and I realized I needed to rise to the challenge bravely. Now, I’m one of the top students in physics.

From my experience, I have learned that it is not our inborn gifts and our efforts that helps us achieve success. When we come across challenges, you should fight bravely instead of giving up.

 

1. challenge → challenges 2. happens → happened 3. shocking → shocked 4. find后面加what 5. stopped后面删掉to 6. Unfortunately → Fortunately 7. a problem → the/my problem 8. gifts 后面的and → but 9. helps → help 10. you → we 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。作者通过自己高中的经历告诉我们,成功不是靠天赋,而是靠努力,当我们遇到挑战时,应该勇敢地战斗而不是放弃。 第一处:考查名词单复数。challenge为可数名词,根据定语various可知这里指的是“各种各样的挑战”,表达的是复数意义,故将challenge改成challenges。 第二处:考查时态。根据时间状语when I entered senior high school可知这里是关于作者上高中的事情,事情发生在过去,要用一般过去时。故将happens改成happened。 第三处:考查形容词。句意:我震惊地发现物理老师教的东西完全超出了我的理解力。shocking意为“令人震惊的”,而shocked意为“感到震惊的”,描述的是一种情感。根据句意,这里要表达的是“我感到震惊”,应该用shocked而不是shocking。故将shocking改成shocked. 第四处:考查名词性从句。分析可知find后有个宾语从句,在宾语从句中the physics teacher was teaching做主语是一个主语从句,这个主语从句缺少一个引导词。分析可知引导词在主语从句中做teach的宾语,故要用what引导这个主语从句,且这个what不能省略掉。故在find后加what。 第五处:考查固定搭配。stop to do sth意为“停下来做某事(停下来去做另一件事情)”, stop doing sth意为“停止做某事(停止手上正在做的事情)”,根据后文“my grades were poor”可知作者的成绩更差了,这说明作者是“停止了努力”而不是“停下来去努力”,应该用stop doing这个词组。故将stopped 后的to去掉。 第六处:考查副词。根据后文“my teacher didn’t give up on me”可知作者的老师没放弃作者,这是一件幸运的事,unfortunately(不幸地是)不符合语境,应该用其反义词Fortunately(幸运地是)。故将Unfortunately改成Fortunately。 第七处:考查冠词和形容词性物主代词。句意:相反的是,他帮我分析了(我的)问题,我意识到我需要勇敢地面对挑战。根据句意,这里特指作者遇到的问题,不是泛指某个问题,应该用定冠词the或者my修饰problem。故将a改成the/my。 第八处:考查连词。句意:从我的经历中,我知道了不是我们的天赋而是我们的努力帮助我们获得成功。根据句意,这里要表达的是“不是我们的天赋而是我们的努力”,使用了not…but(不是……而是)结构,故将and改成but。 第九处:考查主谓一致。分析可知本句是一个强调句,that指代的是our efforts表达的是复数意义,that从句中的谓语动词也要用复数。故将helps改成help。 第十处:考查代词。根据“When we come across challenges“可知作者这里说的是“我们”而不是“你”应该怎么样。故将you改成we。  
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D.Traffickers will give it a second thought when considering the cost of the trafficking.

2.What does the author want to convey mainly in Paragraph 3?

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D.Scientists have known the transferring path of COVID-19.

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A.Dr Rebecca Drury suggests stopping the trade of wildlife.

B.The most trafficked mammals in the world are the pangolin.

C.FFI is trying to find the source of the illegal wildlife trade.

D.Humans can prevent global crisis if they stop the illegal wildlife trade.

4.What is the purpose of the article?

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B.To confirm illegal wildlife trade threatens some of our beloved animals.

C.To discuss how to stop the trafficking.

D.To call on immediate action to end the illegal wildlife trade.

 

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