Question

假如你上周去北京旅游了，参观了长城，请根据以下的信息要点写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍该景点并谈谈你的参观感受。

历史	有两千多年的历史
特点	世界上最长的城墙，长6000多千米 建筑材料主要为石头、砖头，修建工作都是人工进行 主要用于防御外来入侵者，沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台（watchtower）
现状	世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

The Great Wall, which is more than 6,000 kilometers long, is the longest wall in the world. It has a history of more than 2,000 years. It is made of stone and bricks and almost all the construction was done by hand without any machine. As the wall was built to defend the country against foreign invaders, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall. Now, the Great Wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many visitors from all over the world every year.

If you have a chance to visit it, you will be delighted with the great tourist attraction.

【解析】

本篇书面表达要求写一篇英语短文。假如你上周去北京旅游了，参观了长城，根据表格信息写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍该景点并谈谈你的参观感受。

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.历史：有两千多年的历史；2.特点：世界上最长的城墙，长6000多千米建筑材料主要为石头、砖头，修建工作都是人工进行，主要用于防御外来入侵者，沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台；3.现状：世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游。写作时注意主要使用一般现在时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：the Great Wall，more than 6,000 kilometers long，the longest wall in the world. It has a history of more than 2,000 years. be made of stone and bricks，by hand，defend the country against foreign invaders， There were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall. one of the most famous places of interest in China，attract many visitors from all over the world。可以使用的衔接词：1.表示选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…，neither…nor，or，as well as…，both…and…。2.表示因果关系的连接词：therefore，so，as a result，as a result of …，because of，due to，owing to，thanks to等。3.表示时间顺序的连接词：then，later，meanwhile，at the beginning，in the end，before long，as soon as，at first，for the first(second…)time，the minute，the moment等。4.表示转折对比关系的连接词：yet，but，while，on the contrary，on the other hand，however等。5.表示解释说明的连接词：that is，that is to say，in other words，such as，for instance，and so on等。6.表示递进关系的连接词：not only…but (also)，what’s more，what’s worse，besides，in addition，worse still，moreover等。7.表示总结的连接词：in a word，on the whole，in short，briefly，in brief，to sum up，in all等。