Question

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jenny发来邮件，祝福你爷爷百岁生日，并询问你们打算如何给爷爷过生日。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1 .感谢祝福；

2.祝寿安排；

3.敬老爱老。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

Sample writing:

Dear Jenny,

How are you? I'm busy preparing for the coming national college entrance examination. Thank you very much for your congratulations to my grandfather on his 100th birthday.

You know, we're a big family. My grandfather has five sons and three daughters. All the members of our big family will be present on his birthday. Since his birthday is a few days before my most important exam, my father will go back to his hometown representing me and my mother. But on that day I'll give my best wishes to my grandfather on the phone. I'm as close to my grandparents as to my father and mother. In China, we value the old pretty much, for they are a real treasure to a family.

Thanks again for your kindness. Wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jenny回复一封邮件，内容为打算如何给爷爷过生日。

第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生给英国朋友Jenny发来邮件，祝福你爷爷百岁生日，并询问你们打算如何给爷爷过生日。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1 .感谢祝福；2.祝寿安排；3.敬老爱老。因此，可将写作分成三段。第一段：表示感谢。第二段：祝寿安排；敬老爱老。第三段：结尾。

第二步：列关键短语。如：prepare for，congratulations on，on the phone，be close to等。

第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。

第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：since、but等。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。