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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When the earthquake was happened in 2008 my aunt was still a little girl in small county in Sichuan. Today, she can well remember doctors and nurses in white overalls which were busy day and night save the injured in our hometown. It was then when she made up her mind to be someone like them. Her dreams came true after she graduated from a local medical school. On January 2020, when bad news came that Hubei was badly in need of doctors and nurses to fight COVID-19, she applied to be there to help out but her application was approved. Before she leaves, she told us she was grateful for what people did for us after the earthquake and that she had decided to pay them forward.

 

1. was 删掉。2. in small之间加a。3. which→who/that。4. save→saving。5. when→that。6. dreams→dream。7. On→In。8. but→and。9. leaves→left。10. them→it。 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。本文通过记叙作者的阿姨在地震中的所见所闻立志成为一名医生,最终成为医生支援武汉抗疫的故事。 1. 考查动词时态。这里地震发生是在2008年,是过去发生的事情,故用过去时态。happened是不及物动词,没有被动,不必再多余添加was。故讲was 删掉。 2. 考查不定冠词。根据句意,我阿姨生活在一座小县城里面。一座小城,应该使用不定冠词来表达in a small county。故在in small county 之间加上不定冠词a。 3. 考查关系代词。根据句子结构分析得知句子的先行词为doctors and nurses,故为人,引导词应该为引导人的关系代词作定语从句,使用that是因为前面的先行词为复数特指所有的医护人员。故将which改成who/that。 4. 考查现在分词作补足语。句意是日夜忙碌着拯救我家乡的受伤者。be busy doing… 忙于作……。故将save改成saving。 5. 考查强调句型。这里表示的结构是强调句型,故根据结构构成it was then that…就是在那个时候她决定成为一名像他们一样的人。故将when改成that。 6. 考查名词的单复数。根据上下文,她的梦想就是这一个要成为他们一样的人。名词dream是单数形式。故将dreams改成dream。 7. 考查介词。在表示月份的时候只需要用in即可。故将On改成In。 8. 考查并列连词。她申请去武汉抗疫,然后被同意了。这两件事是并列的两件事,是不带转折关系的并列。故将but改成and。 9. 考查时态。在她离开去武汉之前,她告诉我们说……。这里告诉我们说是过去时态,根据状语从句跟随主句的时态变化而变化的规律,应该也是过去时态,故将leaves改成left。 10. 考查代词。根据句意,她决定付出自己的努力为在地震中为他们付出的医护人员而献身。这里pay it forward中应该使用it,因为她决定做的事情是一件事情。故将them改成it。  
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