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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week, we were attracted by the announcement, say all the school clubs would gather on the sports field during the lunch break on Monday afternoon and that we could join in the club we like. Everybody was excited about it. After lunch,we run onto the sports field. I was amazed with the number and variety of the club: the Cartoon Club, the Guitar Club, the Basketball Club and so on. It was not easy make a choice. But I decided to become a member of the Guitar Club, so I love music. I signed up and so did some other students which shared my interest. I believe music and new friends will make your life more interestingly.

 

1. the → an 2. say → saying 3. 删除join后的in 4. run → ran 5. club → clubs 6. easy后加to 7. so → because 8. which → who/that 9. your → my/our 10. interestingly → interesting 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了上周作者在学校选俱乐部的故事。通过仔细的考虑作者最终选择了吉他俱乐部,希望可以通过音乐结交朋友、丰富自己的生活。 1. 考查冠词。句意:上周,我们被一则通知吸引了,通知说学校俱乐部会在周一下午的午餐休息时间聚集在操场上,并且我们可以参加自己喜欢的俱乐部。announcement“通知”是可数名词,根据句意可知,此处是泛指,应用不定冠词,又announcement是元音音素开头,故将the改为an。 2. 考查非谓语动词。分析句子可知,此处应用非谓语动词作状语,逻辑主语announcement和say之间是主动关系,应用现在分词,故将say改为saying。 3. 考查介词。“参加某个组织”应用join,故删除join后的in。 4. 考查时态。根据last week可知本文讲述过去的事情,应用一般过去时,故将run改为ran。 5. 考查名词的数。根据上文的all the school clubs可知此处应用club的复数形式,故将club改为clubs。 6. 考查固定句型。分析句子可知,此处考查固定句型it is + adj. + to do sth.“做某事是……”,其中it是形式主语,不定式是真正的主语,故在easy后加to。 7. 考查连词。句意:但是我决定成为吉他俱乐部的一员,因为我喜欢音乐。根据句意可知,此处用连词because“因为”符合语境,故将so改为because。 8. 考查定语从句。分析句子可知,此处是定语从句,关系词代替先行词students在从句中充当主语,应用关系代词who/that,故将which改为who/that。 9. 考查代词。句意:我相信音乐和新朋友会让我(们)的生活更加有趣。根据句意可知,此处用“我(们)的”符合语境,照应上文的I,故将your改为my/our。 10. 考查形容词。分析句子可知,此处应用形容词作宾补,make sth. interesting“使……有趣”,故将interestingly改为interesting。  
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