Question

假如你是李华，你的外国网友Tom打算暑期来盐城旅游，现在他想对盐城有一个初步的了解。请你结合实际情况给他回信，内容包括:

1. 对他表示欢迎；

2. 举例介绍盐城的旅游或文化特色。

注意:

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.信的开头已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

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Answer

Dear Tom,

I’m writing to extend my warm welcome to you and introduce Yancheng.

The place name itself originates from the historically important salt-cooking yards, salt rivers and production, which make up Haiyan Culture. Yancheng, famous for its wetlands, is an ideal shelter for many birds. Thus, you can watch red-crowned cranes at Yancheng Nature Reserve for the Rare Birds. As for folk art, Huai Opera Culture cannot be more typical of our city.

I am thrilled at the prospect of seeing you in Yancheng.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以李华的身份给外国友人Tom写一封回信，对盐城进行相关介绍。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法。

要求：

1.对他表示欢迎；

2.举例介绍盐城的旅游或文化特色。

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

extend my warm；originates from；typical of

第三步：连词成句

1.I’m writing to extend my warm welcome to you and introduce Yancheng.

2.The place name itself originates from the historically important salt-cooking yards, salt rivers and production, which make up Haiyan Culture.

3.As for folk art, Huai Opera Culture cannot be more typical of our city.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表示文章结构顺序：表示欢迎；介绍盐城的旅游和文化特色。

2. 表示并列补充关系：and；Thus；As for.

第五步：润色修改