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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Many parents have bought their children their own computers, hope that they will use them sensible for their schoolwork and have the latest skills. Schools teach information technology as an essential part of the school curriculum. But some people feel they have a lot of disadvantage. Teenagers don’t have a balanced life and computers are turning them into “geeks” which no longer take exercise or even know how to have a conversation. An expert also warned the dangers of “chatting” to people one doesn’t know over the Internet. “ I strongly recommend that the government ban all Internet cafes as such many teenagers are wasting their time on games and Internet chatting which has nothing to do with their schoolwork. But, some teenagers can be seen as good examples as they put the enthusiasm for computers to good use. Computers help him organize the schoolwork and learn a future career as well as.

 

1. hope→hoping 2. sensible→sensibly 3. disadvantage→disadvantages 4. which→who 5. warned后加of/about 6.such→so 7. has→have 8. But→However 9.him→them 10. 去掉第二个as 【解析】 这是一篇议论文。文章分析了电脑给孩子们来带的利与弊。 1.考查非谓语动词。句意:许多父母给他们的孩子买了自己的电脑,希望他们能明智地使用它们来完成学业,并掌握最新的技能。分析句子,hope所处分句无主语,故hope需用非谓语动词。hope和逻辑主语Many parents之间表示主动关系,所以用现在分词作状语表示主动。故将hope改为hoping。 2.考查副词。句意:希望他们能明智地使用它们来完成学业,并掌握最新的技能。分析句子,sensible词性为形容词,不可被动词use修饰。动词修饰副词,故将sensible改为sensibly。 3.考查名词复数。句意:但是有些人觉得他们有很多缺点。分析句子,disadvantage 译为“缺点”为可数名词。此处要表示复数被a lot of 修饰。故将disadvantage改为disadvantages。 4.考查定语从句。句意:青少年的生活不平衡,电脑正在把他们变成“极客”,不再锻炼身体,甚至不知道如何交谈。分析句子,定语从句的先行词为students是人而非物。故将which改为who。 5.考查介词。句意:一位专家也警告了在网上与陌生人“聊天”的危险。分析句子,warn about / of 译为“警告”,是固定搭配。故在warn和the之间加of / about。 6.考查副词。句意:我强烈建议政府禁止所有网吧,因为许多青少年把时间浪费在游戏和网络聊天上,这与他们的功课无关。分析句子,such为形容词不可修饰后面的形容词many,副词可以修饰形容词。故将such改为so。 7.考查主谓一致。句意:因为许多青少年把时间浪费在游戏和网络聊天上,这与他们的功课无关。分析句子,定语从句的引导词which 指代先行词wasting their time on games and Internet chatting,因此定语从句的主语表示复数。故根据主谓一致原则,定语从句的动词也用复数。故将has 改为have。 8.考查副词。句意:但是,一些青少年可以被视为很好的例子,因为他们把对电脑的热情很好地使用。分析句子,不需用逗号将But和其他句子成分隔开,而however可以。故将But改为However。 9.考查代词。句意:电脑帮助他们组织学校作业,并了解未来的职业。分析句子,句中应用them来指代前文的some teenagers。故将him改为them。 10.考查固定短语。句意:电脑帮助他们组织学校作业,并了解未来的职业。分析句子,as well as 译为“也,又 ,还”一般放在句中。放在肯定句末的是as well。故第二个as 多余,应去掉。  
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