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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(╲)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My mother is a ordinary woman with extraordinary ability. Poor as my family is, but with my mother’s constant care and love, I feel warmly and happy. She always thinks of others first and never complains anything in her life, viewed life with an optimistic attitude. Also, she is a teacher with a good sense of humor and makes her students interest in English study. She shows great patient to those naughty ones, who also gives great comments on her in return. My mother always tries his best to deal with things perfectly. I hope I can be as good as my mother when I grow up. How a hero she is in my mind!

 

a→an 去掉but warmly→warm complains后加of或者about; viewed→viewing interest→interested patient→patience gives→give his→her How→What 【解析】 本文是记叙文。作者讲述了自己的母亲。母亲平凡,但是有非凡的能力、乐观幽默,有耐心。总是先考虑别人,完美地处理事情。作者希望长大后,成为母亲那么好的人。 1. 考查冠词。此处泛指“一个普通的妇女”,ordinary是以元音因素开头的单词,故is后加an。 2.考查连词。句意:尽管我们家贫穷,有母亲的关心和爱,我感觉温暖和兴奋。as引导让步状语从句,无需but引导主句,故将but去掉。 3.考查形容词。feel是系动词,接形容词作表语,故将warmly改为warm。 4.考查介词和固定短语。句意:她总是先考虑别人,从不抱怨生活中的任何事情,用积极乐观的态度看待生活。complain of/about“抱怨……”是常用短语。故complains后加of或者about。 5.考查非谓语动词。句意同上。分析句子可知,主句谓语动词是and连接的thinks of和complains,故view用非谓语动词形式作状语,view与逻辑主语she是主动关系,故将viewed改为viewing。 6.考查固定结构。句意:此外,她是一个很有幽默感的老师,让她的学生对英语学习感兴趣。其中,and连接两个并列的谓语,这里是make + n + adj. 结构,表示感兴趣的,用v+ed形式。故将interest改为interested。 7.考查名词。形容词修饰名词,这里需要作动词show的宾语,用名词,故将patient改为patience。 8.考查主谓一致。句意:她对那些淘气的孩子表现出极大的耐心,他们也给了她很大的评价作为回报。who引导非限制性定语从句,先行词是those naughty ones,关系词从句中作主语,关系词替代先行词,故定语从句的谓语动词与先行词保持人称和数的一致,先行词是复数,文章主时态是一般现在时,故将gives该give。 9.考查代词。句意:我的母亲尽力完美地处理事情。指母亲尽力,故将his改为her。 10.考查感叹词。How是副词,修饰形容词或副词;what引导的感叹句,修饰名词。此处修饰hero,用what,故将How改为What。  
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