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假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2、只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。

Li Ming is a friend of mineI’m glad he had changed greatly in the past two yearsI clearly remember he was quite fat two years beforeHe got tired so easy that he couldn’t take exercise, that made him very upset. Laterhe realized unless he went on like thathe would end up achieving nothingSohe made up his mind to make a changeHe went running every morning and playing basketball every afternoonBesidehe followed a diet of more vegetables and less meatHe did all that he could lose weightHe is now an energetic boy in a good healthSo when faced with problemswe should overcome it with great determination and strong willpower

 

1.had→has 2.before→ago; 3.easy→easily; 4.that→which或在that前加and; 5.unless→if; 6.playing→played; 7. Beside→Besides 8.could后加to; 9.去掉a; 10. it→them 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了我的朋友约翰积极锻炼身体,减肥成功,成为了一个健康、精力充沛的孩子的故事。这件事告诉我们要有决心和坚强的意志力去克服困难。 1.考查时态。句意:我很高兴他在过去两年中变化很大。根据“in the past two years”在过去的两年里,可知,此处应用现在完成时,主语是he,即用has changed。故将had改为has。 2.考查时间状语。句意:我清楚地记得两年前他很胖。根据上下文可知,约翰两年前很胖,两年前要用two years ago。故将before 改为ago。 3.考查副词。句意:他很容易感觉累,以至于不能进行锻炼。此处easy修饰got tired,作状语,修饰动词,要用副词形式,故将easy改为easily。 4.考查非限制性定语从句关系词或并列句。句意:他很容易感觉累,以至于不能进行锻炼,这使他很心烦。分析句子结构可知,此句含有非限制性定语从句,先行词为整个主句内容,关系词在从句中作主语,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,要用which引导,所以that改成which;或者用and连接前后两个句子,构成并列句,that为后一个分句的主语,指代前文提到的内容,所以在that前加and。故将that改为which或者在that前面添加and。 5. 考查连词。句意:后来,他意识到如果他继续这样下去,他将什么也做不成。根据句意可知,此处为如果这样的话,而unless意为 除非(=if not),表示如果,应当用连词if 。故将unless 改为if。 6.考查时态。句意:他每天早上跑步,每天下午打篮球。根据前后文可知,此处描述的是约翰减肥的故事,是过去发生的,应用一般过去时;且and用来连接前后两个并列的动词,应和“went running”保持时态一致。故将playing改为played。 7.考查副词。句意:此外,他遵照多吃蔬菜,少吃肉的饮食。根据上下文可知,此处应为介绍减肥的另外一种方法,而beside为介词,意为“在……旁边,在……附近”语义不通顺;besides作副词时,表示“而且”、“并且”、“此外”等意思,语义通顺。故将Beside改为Besides。 8.考查非谓语动词。句意:他竭尽所能减肥。分析句子结构可知,他为了减肥,做了所有他可以做的事,此处用动词不定式表目的,作目的状语。故在could后面添加to。 9.考查固定搭配。句意:他现在是一个精力充沛、身体健康的男孩。“in good health”意为“身体好”,是固定搭配,故将a去掉。 10. 考查代词。句意:所以当面对问题的时候,我们应该用巨大的决心和坚强的意志力去克服它们。分析句意可知,此处指代前面的problems,是复数,故要用them。故将it 改为them.
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