Question

短文改错

After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They were silent, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. “Excuse me,” she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. “You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, “That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didn’t think she looked like Grandma.” “Neither did me.” said Mother cheerfully.

Answer

1.notice →noticed

2.occupy→occupied

3.young前加a

4.clearly→clear

5.on →by/at

6.put→putting

7.many→much

8.删除to

9.So→But

10.me→I

【解析】

本文是记叙文。文章讲述了作者和妈妈一起到餐馆吃饭时，发生的故事。

1.考查时态。根据时间状语after shopping可知，文章是叙述过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时。故notice改为noticed。

2.考查过去分词。句意：我注意到母亲在看旁边一张桌子，这张桌子被一位老妇人和一对年轻夫妇占用。table 和occupy 之间为逻辑上的动宾关系，因此用过去分词作后置定语。故occupy 改为occupied。

3.考查冠词。此处用不定冠词a表示数量，意思为“一对”；young的发音是以辅音音素开头，因此用不定冠词a。故young前加a。

4.考查形容词。在be动词was后，应该接形容词作表语；此处是句型It was clear that…“很明显”。故clearly改为clear。

5.考查介词。句意：当我们离开的时候，母亲在他们的桌子旁停下来。根据句意，此处应用介词by，意思为“在……旁边”；也可以用介词at，短语at the table“在桌子旁”。故on改为by/at。

6.考查现在分词。句子主语she和put her arm之间是逻辑上的主动关系，“put her arm…”应该用现在分词作伴随状语；put的现在分词需要双写-t，再加-ing。故put改为putting。

7.考查副词。修饰动词remind，应该用副词形式。故many改为much。

8.考查动词。句意：那女人高兴地笑着接受了。短语 accept sth. “接受……”，后面直接接宾语，不需要介词to。故删除to。

9.考查连词。前一句说“你真是太好了”， 后一句说“我觉得她长得不像奶奶”，两个句子之间是语义上的转折，不是因果关系，因此用but表示转折关系。故So改为But。

10.考查代词。句意：我也觉得她长得不像你奶奶。此处是倒装句型“Neither +助动词+主语”，后面是主语，应该用主格形式，不是宾格形式。故me改为I。