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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I was still young in my high school, my mother dragged me to play basketball to lose weight. Therefore, it turned out to be a bitter failure because I devoted my time on study. One day, a friend of me contacted me and suggested that we start to swim. Without any hesitation, I agreed because we all thought that it was coolest thing in the world. I couldn’t forget the day on that I was thrown into the cold water. Fortunately, I survived. Honest speaking, I had a hard time recovered from the shock. Then my friend teaches me to hold my breath underwater. Finally, I succeeded. Now realizing that having sports are beneficial to my health, I develop a strong taste for swimming, which becomes part of my life.

 

1. Therefore→However/Nevertheless 2. on→to 3. me→mine 4. all→both 5. coolest 前面加 the 6. that→which 7. Honest→Honestly 8. recovered→ recovering 9. teaches→taught 10. are→ is 【解析】 本文为一篇记叙文。文章讲述了我为了减肥去游泳,最后爱上了游泳。 1.考查副词。句意:然而,这是一次痛苦的失败,因为我把时间都花在学习上了。结合前文When I was still young in my high school, my mother dragged me to play basketball to lose weight.当我还在高中的时候,我妈妈拉我去打篮球减肥。后文it turned out to be a bitter failure because I devoted my time on study. 这是一次痛苦的失败,因为我把时间都花在学习上了。前后文有明显的转折含义,However/Nevertheless可表转折,意为“然而”。故Therefore改为However/Nevertheless。 2.考查固定搭配。句意:结果是一次惨痛的失败,因为我把时间都花在学习上了。devote…to…为固定搭配,意为 “把……投入到……”。故on改为to。 3.考查名词性物主代词。句意:一天,我的一个朋友联系我,建议我们开始游泳。分析句子可知,a friend of后用名词性物主代词。故me改为mine 。 4.考查限定词。句意:我同意了,因为我们俩都认为这是世界上最酷的事情。分析句意可知,本句中的我们指的是我和我的一个朋友,两个人,两者都为both。故all改为both 。 5.考查定冠词。句意:我同意了,因为我们俩都认为这是世界上最酷的事情。分析句子可知,本句中使用的是形容词的最高级,形容词的最高级前要加the。故coolest 前面加 the。 6.考查定语从句。句意:我忘不了我被扔进冰冷水里的那一天。在定语从句中,如果把介词提到关系代词前,关系词不能that,只能用which。故that改为which 。 7.考查副词。句意:老实说,我很难从震惊中恢复过来。分析句子可知,本句中的honestly speaking为固定搭配,意为“老实说”。故Honest改为Honestly 。 8.考查现在分词。句意:老实说,我很难从震惊中恢复过来。分析句子可知 have a hard time (in) doing sth为固定搭配,意为“做某事有困难 ”。故recovered改为 recovering 。 9.考查时态。句意:然后我的朋友教我在水下屏住呼吸。分析句子可知,本文讲述的是过去发生的事,故用一般过去时,teach的过去式为taught。故teaches改为taught。 10.考查主谓一致。句意:现在意识到运动有益于我的健康,我对游泳产生了强烈的兴趣,这成为我生活的一部分。分析句子可知,主语为having sports,动名词作主语,谓语动词用单数形式。故are改为 is。  
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