Question

假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter写信问你中国中学生课余是否做兼职，并请你谈谈中学生做兼职的利弊。请写回信，要点包括：

1. 回答中国学生是否做兼职；

2. 谈谈学生做兼职的利弊；

3. 这个假期你是否会做兼职。

Dear Peter，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Peter,

I am glad to receive your letter asking whether Chinese students will take part-time jobs in their spare time. I admit that it is a common phenomenon to do part-time jobs among students. Many students will take advantage of their spare time to do some part-time jobs. But I think it's like a double-edged sword.

First of all, many students do accumulate much work experience through part-time jobs. But on the other hand, too much time spent on part-time jobs will waste their study time.

I will do some part-time jobs in the vacation under the condition of arranging my time well. As long as I arrange my time well, the positive effects of part-time jobs will outweigh the negative effects. I hope my reply will settle your question. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Lihua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以李华的身份向笔友Peter回信：关于中国中学生课余是否做兼职，并谈谈中学生做兼职的利弊。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法。

要求：

1.回答中国学生是否做兼职；

2.谈谈学生做兼职的利弊；

3.这个假期你是否会做兼职。

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

take part-time jobs; a common phenomenon; do accumulate much work experience; under the condition of

第三步：连词成句

1.I am glad to receive your letter asking whether Chinese students will take part-time jobs in their spare time. I admit that it is a common phenomenon to do part-time jobs among students.

2.First of all, many students do accumulate much work experience through part-time jobs.

3.I will do some part-time jobs in the vacation under the condition of arranging my time well.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表示文章结构顺序：回答问题；阐述兼职利弊；回答假期是够会做兼职。

2. But; First of all; But on the other hand; As long as

第五步：润色修改