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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

Last weekend, my parents told me a good news that my family would go camping with my uncle’s family.I feel so excited about it, because I could spend the whole night outside,which had never been happened before.When the day came, we brought the equipments and some food. In the afternoon, the two families settled down, and then they started to walk around. My cousins and I rushed to a forest and went to the highest point, there we could appreciate the whole sight. Stood on the highest place, I felt so greatly. We enjoyed a grander sight by climbing a greater height. At night, we set fire and danced happily. It was so a happy moment for me.

 

1. a→the 2. feel→felt 3. 将been去掉 4. equipments→equipment 5. they→we 6. there→where 7. Stood→Standing 8. greatly→great 9. 在climbing后面加to 10.so→such 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者一家人和叔叔一家人去野营的快乐经历。 1.考查冠词。句意:上周末,我的父母告诉我一个好消息,我的家人将和叔叔的家人一起露营。分析句子可知that my family would go camping with my uncle’s family是news的同位语,是特指消息的具体内容,因此使用定冠词the,news是不可数名词,不能用不定冠词修饰,故将a改为the。 2.考查动词时态。句意:我对此感到非常兴奋,因为我可以在外面度过一整夜,这是以前从未发生过的。通读全文确定时态为一般过去时,此处需使用一般过去式,与全文时态一致。故将feel改为felt。 3.考查被动语态。句意:我对此感到非常兴奋,因为我可以在外面度过一整夜,这是以前从未发生过的。分析句子可知,后半句是非限定性定语从句,主语是前面的I could spend the whole night outside这件事,与happened之间为主动关系。故将been去掉。 4.考查名词复数。句意:这天到了,我们带来了设备和一些食物。分析句子可知主语为we,且equipment是不可数名词,无复数形式。故将equipments改为equipment。 5.考查人称代词。句意:下午两个家庭安顿下来,然后开始四处走走。根据前句we brought the equipment and some food可知全文主语为第一人称,且two families为复数,因此此处代词应使用第一人称复数形式we。根据they改为we。 6.考查非限定性定语从句。句意:我和我的表兄弟姐妹跑到了森林,到达了最高点,在那里我们可以欣赏到整个风景。分析句子结构可知此句为非限定性定语从句,先行词是highest point,在从句中做地点状语,因此使用连词where引导非限定性定语从句。根据there改为where。 7.考查非谓语动词。句意:站在最高的地方,我感觉好极了。分析句子可知,句中存在谓语动词felt,因此前半句中动词应使用非谓语动词形式,且I与stand之间为主动关系,因此使用现在分词形式standing做伴随状语。根据Stood改为Standing。 8.考查形容词。句意:站在最高的地方,我感觉好极了。分析句子可知,此处felt是系动词,后接形容词作表语。故将greatly改为great。 9.考查介词。句意:通过攀登更高的高度,我们看到了更宏伟的景象。分析句子并翻译语境可知,此处意为“爬到更高的高度”,应使用表示方向的介词to。故在climbing后面加to。 10.考查固定搭配。句意:对我来说真是一个快乐的时刻。分析句子可知,“such+a+名词”是固定搭配意为“多么...”,切合题意。故将so改为such。  
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