Question

假设你是David，高一年级学生。你打算写一篇介绍自己近况的短文，请根据下面的要点提示，说明自己的情况，并谈谈自己的心愿。词数120词左右。

要点提示：

性格	勤劳，从不介意为班级多做一些额外工作，乐于助人；
喜好	最喜欢电影明星成龙，认为他是世界上最有天赋的演员之一，喜欢买与他有关的书籍，CD等；
麻烦	无法做到既认真学习又有时间从事自己的爱好，父母不理解他，只关心考试后的分数。
心愿	(1)…;   (2) …

My name is David.

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Answer

My name is David. I’m a student of Senior 1.

I have many hobbies, for example, playing basketball, reading, swimming. To tell you the truth, I like seeing films best. My favourite film star is Jacky Chan. I think he is one of the most talented actors in the world. I like buying books and CDs about him and that is why I spend most of my pocket money on them. But my parents don’t understand me. They only care about my marks after tests. I can’t achieve a balance between my hobbies and study.

I wish my parents could understand me. I need their support and understanding. I plan to talk with my teachers, my friends or youth workers about my problems. Maybe I can get help from them.

【解析】

这是一篇图表类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是David，高一年级学生。你打算写一篇介绍自己近况的短文，请根据下面的要点提示，说明自己的情况，并谈谈自己的心愿。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：hobbies(爱好)；for example (例如)；film star (电影明星)；one of (……之一)；talented (有才能的)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和第一人称。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。