Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Since last year, the heavily smog has occurred in our city. The smog, that has made our daily life inconvenient,  has also done great harm people's health. Many traffic accident have happened because of the bad weather. Besides, many people have to stay inside to avoid the harm air. What's the worse, many people have suffered from bad coughs, sore throats but other serious diseases.

Personally, I thought we should make efforts to protect the environment. I strongly agree with the idea what we can try to drive less and buy green products. Only when we have the awareness（意识）of environmental protection can us have cleaner air.

1._________

2._________

3._________

4._________

5._________

6._________

7._________

8._________

9._________

10._________

Answer

1.heavily→heavy

2.that→which

3.people’s death 前面加to

4.accident→accidents

5.harm→harmful

6.the去掉

7.but→and

8.thought→think

9.what→that

10.us→we

【解析】

文章是议论文，首先描述了去年大雾对人们生活的影响，然后提出保护环境的意见。

1.

考查形容词。heavy 后面是名词smog，需要用形容词修饰名词，表示浓雾。故将heavily改成heavy。

2.

考查非限制性定语从句。本句先行词是smog, 先行词和从句隔开是非限制性定语从句，先行词是物，在从句中做主语，非限制性定语从句不能用that，故将that改成which。

3.

考查固定搭配。do harm to 表示对…有害，固定搭配，故people’s health前面加to。

4.

考查名词复数。accident 是可数名词，前面有many修饰，many需要加可数名词复数，故将accident改成accidents。

5.

考查形容词。 harmful air表示有害气体，需要用形容词修饰名词air，故将harm改成harmful。

6.

考查固定搭配。What’s more 表示除此之外，是固定搭配。故将the去掉。

7.

考查连词。bad coughs, sore throats 和other efforts是并列关系，用and连接并列成分，故将but改成and。

8.

考查时态。这里表示我现在的看法，用一般现在时表示现在的状态，故将thought改成think。

9.

考查同位语从句。这里idea等于从句we can try to drive less and buy green products, 名词idea不在从句中做任何成分，所以是同位语从句，用连接词that引导定语从句。故将what改成that。

10.

考查人称代词。这里only+状语从句放在句首，整个句子倒装了，原句应该是We can have cleaner air when we have the awareness of environment protection。我们做句子的主语应该用主格，故将us改成we。