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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Recently I took a part in a geography research activity, whose theme was environmental pollution and protection. We took variety pictures showing the present pollution conditions of our city. To our surprise, there are still a great number people doing silly things to our surrounding. Some people often throw rubbish whichever they like. Some cars gave off harmful gases and waste water is pouring into rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes have to make his way through dusty winds as a result of the pollution. Through our research, we have come to realize what everybody must pay more attention to protect our environment and that some measures should be taken to protect it.

 

1.去掉a 2.variety→various 3.number后面添加of 4.surrounding→surroundings 5.whichever→wherever 6.gave→give 7.pouring→poured 8.his→their 9.what→that或者去掉what 10.protect→protecting 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者参加地理研究活动,认识到每个人都必须更加关注保护我们的环境。 1. 考查固定搭配。句意:最近我参加了一个地理研究活动,主题是环境污染与保护。“take part in”意为“参加,参与”,是固定搭配。故a多余,应去掉。 2. 考查形容词。句意:我们拍了各种各样的照片,展示我们城市目前的污染状况。修饰名词pictures,用形容词,故将variety改为various。 3. 考查固定搭配。句意:令我们惊讶的是,仍然有很多人在对我们的环境做愚蠢的事情。“a number of”意为“一些,许多”,是固定搭配。故在number后面添加of。 4. 考查名词。句意:令我们惊讶的是,仍然有很多人在对我们的环境做愚蠢的事情。此处位于介词to后面,且有代词our修饰,可以推断应用名词。通常使用复数形式surroundings表示环境。故将surrounding改为surroundings。 5. 考查状语从句连接词。句意:有些人经常随地扔垃圾。分析句子结构可知,此句为地点状语从句,表示“在……的任何(所有)地方”,应用wherever引导,故将whichever改为wherever。 6. 考查时态。句意:一些汽车排放有害气体。此句,描述的是客观事实,且根据and后连接的句子的be动词“is”可知,此处应用一般现在时,故将gave改为give。 7. 考查语态。句意:废水被一些工厂排入河流。主语“waste water”与动词“pour”之间是被动关系,应用被动语态,表示废水被排放。故将pouring改为poured。 8. 考查代词。句意:由于污染,人们有时不得不穿越尘土飞扬的风。此处代词指代“people”人们,且动词“have”为复数形式,可以推断此处应为“make their way through”,故将his改为their。 9. 考查宾语从句连接词。句意:通过我们的研究,我们已经认识到每个人都必须更加关注保护我们的环境,应该采取一些措施来保护它。分析句子结构可知,此处宾语从句作动词realize的宾语,在从句中不作任何成分,没有实际意义,可以用that起引导作用,通常可以将其省略。故将what改为that或者去掉what。 10.考查非谓语动词。句意:通过我们的研究,我们已经认识到每个人都必须更加关注保护我们的环境,应该采取一些措施来保护它。此处非谓语动词位于介词to后面,应用动名词形式。“pay attention to doing”意为“注意做某事”,故将protect改为protecting。
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1.A.Otherwise B.Instead C.Therefore D.However

2.A.changed B.rejected C.presented D.knew

3.A.In particular B.In fact C.As usual D.After all

4.A.count B.adore C.possess D.occupy

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10.A.challenged B.shared C.researched D.blamed

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