Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dr. Zhong Nanshan is one of the famous medical scientist in the 21st century. After graduating from high school, he entered into Beijing Medical College in 1960. In the first Chinese National Games, he sets up a National record of the men’s 400m Hurdles.

In spring of 2003, Zhong Nanshan took an active part in the battle against SARS. At that time, most people had no naturally defenses against the disease. Dangerous although it was, he worked hard day and night treated the patients. Through their hard work, Zhong Nanshan and our workmates achieved remarkable results. Soon the SARS epidemic was stopping.

Zhong Nanshan, that has been working in the medical field for over 60 years, is respected by all the people in China.

Answer

1.scientist→scientists

2.去掉into

3.sets→set

4.in spring→in the spring

5.naturally→natural

6.although→though/as

7.treated→treating

8.our→his

9.stopping→stopped

10.that→who

【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了终南山院士的生平和伟大事迹。

1．考查名词复数。“one of +名词复数”意为“众多事物或人中的其中一个”。这里指终南山是21世纪最著名医药学科学家中的其中一位。故将scientist改为scientists。

2．考查及物动词。enter是及物动词，后面应直接加宾语，表示“进入……”。故去掉into。

3．考查时态。本句在讲过去的事情，应用一般过去时。故将sets改成set。

4．考查冠词。spring后有介词短语of 2003限定时间，这里特指2003年的春天。故在in 后面加the。

5．考查形容词。defenses为名词，我们用形容词修饰名词。故将naturally改为natural。

6．考查让步状语从句和倒装。句意：尽管很危险，但是他依然日日夜夜努力拯救患者。although，though和as可引导让步状语从句，表示“尽管；虽然”。但是as一般用于倒装句，即：将表语、状语或谓语动词放在as之前。though也可这么用。但是although不用于倒装句。本题将形容词dangerous提前，出现倒装。故将although改成though或者as。

7．考查非谓语动词。分析句子成分可知，句子主干为he worked hard，treat与主语成主动关系，所以用现在分词treating the patients做伴随状语。故将treated改成treating。

8．考查代词。句意：通过他们的努力，终南山和他的同事们取得了傲人的成绩。our使用错误，分析句意可知这里指终南山的同事。故将our改成his。

9．考查被动语态。句意：SARS被控制住了。epedemic和动词stop成被动关系，要用被动语态。故将stopping改成stopped。

10. 考查非限制性定语从句。先行词为人且在定语从句中做主语，而且这里是非限制性定语从句，不能用that只能用who。故将that改成who。