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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2020. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I see a yellow car drive up Milton Street and turn the right into Park Road. The next moment, the car hit the man while she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. To surprise, the car didn’t stop and drove off at full speed. I noticed the driver was a young woman wore a pair of glasses but the plate number was AC864. Two minutes late, I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.

 

1. in →on; 2. while →when; 3. sides → side; 4. see →saw; 5. 去掉the; 6. she →he; 7. surprise前加my; 8. wore →wearing或在 wore前加who/that; 9. but →and; 10. late→ later 【解析】     这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了我在街上帮助一个被车撞到了的老人的故事。     1. 考查介词。在具体的某一天的早上时要用介词on。故将in改为 on; 2. 考查连词。固定句型:was /were doing…when…(正在做……这时……),该句式中要用when表示“这时”,故将 while改为when; 3. 考查名词。on the other side of the street.(在大街上的另一边),街道有两边,所以另一边应该用单数形式名词,故将sides 改为 side; 4. 考查动词。全文都在讲过去的事情,用一般过去时。谓语动词see要用动词的过去式saw。故将 see改为saw; 5. 考查冠词。固定短语turn right(向右转),中间无冠词。故去掉the; 6. 考查代词。此处是指“当老人穿越马路时,汽车撞到了他。”主从句的主语都是指同一个老人。老人man是男的,故将she 改为he; 7. 考查代词。固定短语to one’s surprise(令某人吃惊的是),因为此时是“我”看到了事故的全过程,所以是“令我吃惊的是”。故将surprise 前加my; 8. 考查现在分词或关系代词。此处wearing作定语,修饰名词woman,与该名词是主动关系,所以用现在分词作定语。或者在 wore前加定语从句关系词who/that构成定语从句,该关系词指代先行词women,在从句中作主语。故将 wore改为wearing或在 wore前加who/that ; 9. 考查连词。根据句意:我注意到司机是一个戴着一副眼镜的年轻女人,并且车牌号码是ac864。前后两句语意没有转折,是并列关系,所以要用and 连接。故将but改为and; 10. 考查副词。固定用法:Two minutes later(两分钟后),“多长时间后”这类短语中用later 。故将late改为later。  
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