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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Everyone will be full of respect when mentioned a mother’s love. Truly, who can love you more than your dear mother does in world? But in modern society, especial among one-child families, mothers usually give too much love to her only daughter or son. They try to help or even protecting their children in every way, which left their sons or daughters too comfortable to deal with challenges themselves.

What we all know, we have entered into the 21st century, and the young generation will face more challenges in the future. There is nothing wrong for mothers to love their children, and they should also leave rooms for their children to develop themselves and become independent.

 

1. mentioned → mentioning 2.在world前面加the 3. especial → especially 4. her → their 5. protecting → protect 6. left → leaves 7. What → As 8.去掉into 9. rooms → room 10. and → but 【解析】 这是一篇议论文。文章讲述了母亲爱孩子无可厚非,但应该给孩子留下自我发展、独立的空间。 1. 考查现在分词。主语Everyone和动词mention是逻辑上的主谓关系,应用现在分词(doing)表主动,作时间状语,当现在分词的动作和谓语动词动作同时发生时,现在分词用一般式,有时可以加上when,while等连词。故将mentioned改为mentioning。 2. 考查冠词。本句意为“真的,在世界上有谁能比你亲爱的母亲更爱你呢?”固定搭配in the world(在世界上)。故在world前面加the。 3. 考查副词。especial要修饰介词短语among one-child families,副词修饰介词短语,作状语。故将especial改为especially。 4. 考查代词。本句意为“但在现代社会,尤其是独生子女家庭,母亲们通常会对她们的独生女或独生子给予过多的爱。”此处指“母亲们的独生女或独生子”,根据主语mothers,可知应用形容词性物主代词their指代“母亲们的”。故将her改为their。 5. 考查动词。try to do sth.(努力干某事),or并列连词,前后语法结构一致,protect在语法结构上应和help一致,应用动词原形protect。故将protecting改为protect。 6. 考查时态。本句意为“他们试图以各种方式帮助,甚至保护自己的孩子,这让他们的子女过于舒适,而无法自己应对挑战。”which引导非限制性定语从句,先行词是They try to help or even protecting their children in every way这件事,句子作主语,谓语动词用单数,描述的是客观事实,用一般现在时,应用leaves。故将left改为leaves。 7. 考查固定用法。固定用法As we all know(众所周知),as是关系代词,引导非限制性定语从句,首字母大写。故将What改为As。 8. 考查动词。enter是及物动词,后面直接加名词(作宾语),去掉into。故去掉into。 9. 考查名词。本句意为“母亲爱孩子无可厚非,但应该给孩子留下自我发展、独立的空间。”room在本句中意为“空间”,是不可数名词,不加s,应用room。故将rooms改为room。 10. 考查连词。本句意为“母亲爱孩子无可厚非,但应该给孩子留下自我发展、独立的空间。”前后两句表转折,应用连词but。故将and改为but。  
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