You have told me that you are very interested in how we Chinese celebrate our traditional festivals. With the Dragon Boat Festival around the corner, ____________________________________________________________________
Dear Tom,
You have told me that you are very interested in how we Chinese celebrate our traditional festivals. With the Dragon Boat Festival around the corner, I would like to invite you to join us in the celebration in our school. A variety of activities will be included at the celebration, such as eating rice dumplings and reciting ancient poems, which will surely give you great pleasure and enable you to know better about our traditional culture. In addition, I , together with my classmates, hope that you can put on a performance with us. And I think it will be a good combination of our culture and yours. By the way, the celebration will take place in the school lecture hall from 7:00 pm to 9:00 pm on May 30.
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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