Question

假定你是李华，你校本周六组织学生去郊区（suburb）游玩，请给你校美国交换生Emily写一封邮件告知此事，内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.活动内容及注意事项；

3.期望准时参加。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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Answer

Dear Emily,

How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you the notice that our school will go travelling in the suburb this Saturday.

Students will meet at 7 o’ clock outside the school gate on Saturday morning. Because we will experience some farm work with farmers there, such as picking tomatoes, cucumbers and apples, and growing some vegetables, I advise you to wear your old clothes, and comfortable shoes. It will be sunny that day. In case of sunburn, you’d better wear a hat.

I think we’ll have a good time there. Please don’t be late.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给你校美国交换生Emily写一封邮件，告诉她周六组织学生去郊区（suburb）游玩的详细情况。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般将来时。

人称：第一人称

结构：总分法

   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.写信目的；

2.活动内容及注意事项；

3.期望准时参加。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

such as ; advise sb. to do sth.; in case of; had better; have a good time

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m writing to tell you the notice that our school will go travelling in the suburb this Saturday.

2. Students will meet at 7 o’ clock outside the school gate on Saturday morning.

3. Because we will experience some farm work with farmers there, such as picking tomatoes, cucumbers and apples, and growing some vegetables, I advise you to wear your old clothes, and comfortable shoes.

4. In case of sunburn, you’d better wear a hat.

5. I think we’ll have a good time there.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改