Question

假如你是李华，你在英国的笔友Peter写信来询问你在生活中最值得尊敬的人是谁。请你给他写一封回信，内容应包括：

1.你尊敬的人是谁；

2.他或她的主要事迹；

3.你尊敬他的理由。

注意:1．词数100左右;

2．可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Answer

Dear Peter,

In your last letter, you asked me who I respect most, and now I can tell you without hesitation that it is my father.

First, he is very strong and always makes me feel safe. Second, he is good at many things such as basketball and ping-pong. I think he plays ping-pong as well as Malong. Third, he is very responsible and loves me and my mother very much. Of course, what I respect most about him is that he is very kind and always ready to help others. One night, the empty nester next door had a sudden illness. It was my father who rushed him to the hospital and went through the hospitalization procedures for him.

In a word, in my eyes, my father is a great man who deserves my respect.

Yours,

Lihua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封回信：假如你是李华，你在英国的笔友Peter写信来询问你在生活中最值得尊敬的人是谁。请你给他写一封回信，内容应包括：1.你尊敬的人是谁；2.他或她的主要事迹；3.你尊敬他的理由。时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； respect（尊敬），responsible（有责任感的），kind（善良的）， empty nester（空巢老人），hospitalization procedures（住院手续）及deserve（值得）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。