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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Some days before, I didn’t pass a vital exam, that made me depressed. I feel upset and cried alone in the classroom in secret. My best friend, Tom, found that I was in bad mood at that moment. After learning about what had happened, he spent a long time talk with me. He also gave me some good advices on how to get a good grade in the future. However, I was aware how to deal with my study and got relaxing. Tom is always there for him whenever I am in trouble. I’m proud of him.

 

1. before→ago 2. that→which 3. feel→felt 4. in和bad中间加a 5. 去掉about 6. talk→talking 7. advices→advice 8. However→Therefore/Thus 9. relaxing→relaxed 10. him→me 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者没有通过重要的考试,感觉很沮丧。在这个时候,他的最好的朋友帮助他并给他一些建议,让作者知道了如何面对学习上的问题,并重新感到轻松。最后作者表达了对朋友的感谢。 1.考查副词。句意:前几天,我没有通过一个重要的考试,这让我很沮丧。表示在多久时间“以前”可以用before和ago,但ago表示从现在向前回溯,即现在的过去,因此通常与一般过去时连用;before表示从过去向前回溯,即过去的过去,因此通常与过去完成时连用。本句话为一般过去时,指从现在开始向前回溯的几天前之前,故应用ago。故将before改为ago。 2.考查定语从句。句意:前几天,我没有通过一个重要的考试,这让我很沮丧。分析句意及句子结构可知,本句为非限制性定语从句。从句缺少主语且主语指代前面的整个句子I didn’t pass a vital exam(我没有通过一个重要的考试),故引导词应用which。故将that改为which。 3.考查时态。句意:我感到心烦意乱,独自一个人在教室里暗自哭泣。根据上一句中的Some days before(前几天)和本句中的cried可以判定句子的时态应为一般过去时,句中动词应用一般过去时,feel的过去式为felt。故将feel改为felt。 4.考查冠词和固定短语。句意:我的朋友汤姆发现我当时心情不好。mood意为“心情”,当具体表示某一种心情时,需要在mood前面加不定冠词a,表示心情不好时应用短语in a bad mood。或者可以换另一角度把它当作固定短语来记忆,即in a bad mood意为“心情不好”。故在in和bad中间加a。 5.考查动词。句意:得知发生了什么事后,他花了很长时间和我交谈。根据句意和句子结构可判断出本句为what引导的宾语从句,但learn about后面不可以加从句,一般构成短语“learn about sth.”,意为“了解某事”,所以应把about去掉,learn后直接加宾语从句。故将about去掉。 6.考查固定句型。句意:得知发生了什么事后,他花了很长时间和我交谈。句中涉及句型“sb. spend+时间+(in) doing”,意为“某人花费时间做某事”,句中应用动词ing形式。故将talk改为talking。 7.考查名词。句意:他也给了我一些好的建议关于如何在将来取得好成绩。advice意为“建议”,为不可数名词,后面不加s。故将advices改为advice。 8.考查副词。句意:因此,我知道如何处理我的学习并放松起来。分析上下句句子关系,正是因为我朋友的建议,我才知道如何处理我的学习。两句为因果关系,且句中有逗号,故应用表示因果关系的副词therefore或thus。However意为“然而”,不符合句子逻辑关系。故将However改为Therefore/Thus。 9.考查形容词。句意:因此,我知道如何处理我的学习并放松起来。句中单词relaxing是用来形容主语I,即我感到放松。当用来形容人的感觉时应用ed结尾的形容词。故将relaxing改为relaxed。 10.考查代词。句意:每当我有困难时,汤姆总是在我身边。根据文章内容可知,是我的朋友汤姆在我遇到困难的时候帮助了我,可知应该是每当我有困难时,汤姆总是在我身边,而不是在他身边。for为介词,后接代词宾格,“我”宾格为“me”。故将him改为me。  
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