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    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错误的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

National Day is one of my favorite holidays. I am fond travelling around during this holiday. Last National Day , I went to Qinhuangdao with our family. Since it was my first time to going to the seaside, I felt very excited. During the days in Qinhuangdao, we took a sunbath on the beach, seeing the sunrise in the early morning and ate delicious seafood in the nice restaurant. Although we don’t take enough clothes and felt a little cold, but we still enjoyed ourselves there. The hotel we lived in even prepared a lot of meaningful gift for us travelers. How warmly we felt! Everything there went so perfect that I even didn’t want to leave at the end of the holiday.

 

fond 后面加 of our 改成my going 改成 go seeing改成 saw don’t 改成 didn’t nice前面的the 改成a 去掉but gift改成 gifts warmly改成 warm perfect改成- perfectly 【解析】 本文为记叙文。作者叙述了第一次和家人去秦皇岛的愉快经历。 1.考查固定搭配。国庆节是我最喜欢的节日之一。be fond of…为固定搭配,意为“喜欢….”,所以本句中的fond后缺少了of, 故在fond 后面加 of。 2.考查代词。分析句子可知,去年国庆节,我和我的(而不是我们的)家人一起去了秦皇岛。因此本句中our 改成my。 3.考查动词不定式的固定用法。因为这是我第一次去海边,我感到很兴奋。在英语中如果被修饰的词是序数词或被序数词修饰,要用动词不定式作定语,因此第一外边去海边,要用the first time to go…..,故把going 改成 go。 4.考查并列谓语。在秦皇岛的日子里,我们在海滩上晒日光浴,看清晨日出和吃美味的海鲜在不错的餐馆里。分析句子可知,本句中的三个动词短语晒日光浴took a sunbath… 看日出seeing the sunrise ….和吃美味 and ate delicious seafood …三个动词产并列关系,因此把seeing改成 saw。 5.考查时态。根据后面的felt a little cold,可知,本句讲述的是过去发生的事,所以要用一般过去时,故把don’t 改成 didn’t 。 6.考查冠词。在一个不错的餐厅吃美味的海鲜。根据语境可知,本句中指数量“一”,而不是特指,故把nice前面的the 改成a 。 7.考查连词。分析句子Although we don’t take enough clothes and felt a little cold, but we still enjoyed ourselves there.可知,本句为主从复合句,只能有一个连词,而本句中有两个连词,即although和but。虽然我们没有足够的衣服,觉得有点冷,但我们还是很开心,根据固定用法可知,but多余,故去掉but 。 8.考查名词的复数。我们住的旅馆甚至为我们旅客准备了很多有意义的礼物。旅客很多,所以礼物也很多,故把gift改成 gifts 。 9.考查形容词。我们感觉多么温暖啊!本句中的副词warmly在句子中作系动词felt的表语,作系动词的表语一般用形容词,因此把warmly改成 warm。 10.考查副词。那里的一切都那么完美,我甚至不想在假期结束后离开。分析句子可知,本句中的形容词perfect在句中修饰动词went,修饰动词要用副形式,故把perfect改成perfectly。
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