Question

书面表达  (本大题共5分)

学校举办英语征文比赛。请你根据下列内容要点写一篇英语短文，介绍你的朋友玛丽。内容提示如下：

1. 八年级学生，正直、慷慨；

2. 她足够耐心帮助困境中的人；

3. 当有事困扰我时，我乐意找她帮忙；

4. 她绘画比班里任何其他同学都好，她想有一天和徐悲鸿一样有名；

5. 她擅长DIY，上周她……

6. 我能向她学到很多。

注意：  1. 推荐信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 要点4须用1-2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；

3. 词数在70个左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Mary is my best friend.____________________________________________________________

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Answer

Mary is my best friend. She is a Year 8 student. She is honest and generous. She is patient enough to help the people in trouble. When something worries me, I am willing to ask her for help. She draws better than any other classmate in her class. She is good at DIY. Last week she painted her bedroom herself. She also made some paper flowers to decorate it. I can learn a lot from her.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。所给材料较为详细，逻辑清楚，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般现在时态，主语为第三人称单数，句型以简单句为主。写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如patient enough to do, in trouble.， be willing to do, ask sb for help. than any other classmate ,be good at, learn a lot from sb等等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。