Question

书面表达（25分）

假设你叫Daniel, 就那你学习中的压力和影响你最大的Mr. Black两个方面给你的网友Jack写了一份电子邮件。要点如下：

Mr. Black	英语老师，三十几岁，乐于助人、有爱心、有耐心，经常帮助学生解决他们学习中的压力
His advice on how to solve your problems	1、你们这个年龄的学生都有压力，尝试不同的方法来放松自己；2、经常与父母谈心，因为他么会给你宝贵的建议；3、上个月他建议我将我的房间刷成蓝色，以此来让自己平心静气；4、.....; 5、现在的感觉：......
要        求	1、必须包括所给内容要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；2、第4、第5要点请用1至2句话作适当发挥；3、字数100左右，邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总字数。

Dear Jack,

I’m writing to tell you about my English teacher Mr. Black and his advice on how to solve my problems.

Yes, I love him very much because he has helped me a lot with my study.

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I believe you can come up with new ways to deal with you stress.

Best wishes,

Daniel

Answer

Dear Jack,

I’m writing to tell you about my English teacher Mr. Black and his advice on how to solve my problems.

Yes, I love him very much because he has helped me a lot with my study. This year he is more than thirty years old .He is very friendly to us and he is very helpful and patient. He often helps students solve their learning pressure. All the students of your age have pressure He tries different ways to relax yourselves. He will give you valuable advice . Last month he advised me to paint my house blue, in order to let myself calm down .Now I am feeling much better .

I believe you can come up with new ways to deal with you stress.

Best wishes,

Daniel

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。