Question

书面表达

假如你是Millie，请你给班主任(Mr Wu) 写一封推荐信，推荐Sandy为班长。信中要对Sandy进行全面介绍, 90词左右。

1. 有许多优良的个人品质

2. 是一个自信和勤奋的人，而且对一切事物充满好奇

3. 富有创造力，经常能提出各种各样的新想法

4. 她很乐于助人，我们缺课时经常帮我们补习功课

5. 她知道如何做到劳逸结合

6. 充满爱心，……

7. 她是班长的最佳人选。

注意事项：1.短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺。 2.第6点须用1-2句话展开合理想象。

Dear Mr Wu,

I’d like to recommend Sandy as our monitor.

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I hope you can agree with me

Yours,

Millie

Answer

Dear Mr Wu,

I’d like to recommend Sandy as our monitor. I think she has many good personal qualities. She is confident and hard-working. She is curious about everything. She is creative enough to come up with all kinds of new ideas. She is helpful. She often helps us with our lessons if we are absent from school. She knows how to achieve a balance between her schoolwork and her hobbies. She has a heart full of love and she is always ready to help others. She often donates her pocket money to someone in need. I think she is the most suitable person to be our monitor.

I hope you can agree with me

Yours,

Millie

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。题目所给材料内容比较详细，条理清楚，我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：be curious about、come up with、help sb with sth、be absent from、achieve a balance between …and …、be ready to、donate… to…等，这为文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。