Question

书面表达

假如你是Lily, 你的同班同学Lin Mei想认识你的好朋友Jack。请根据下面表格中的信息, 用英语写一封e-mail向Jack介绍Lin Mei。邮件的格式和开头已给出, 70个词左右。可适当发挥。

Name	Lin Mei
Age	14
Birthday	June 20th
Favorite food	ice-cream
Favorite color	blue
Favorite sport	basketball
Favorite subjects	P. E. , English
Telephone number	265-4328
E-mail	Linmei @sina. com

Dear Jack,

Lin Mei is my good friend. ___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

Your friend,

Lily

Answer

One possible version：

Dear Jack,

Lin Mei is my good friend.She wants to make friends with you. Let me introduce her to you. She is 14 years old. Her birthday is on June 20th. She likes eating ice cream. Her favorite color is blue. She likes playing basketball best. Her favorite subjects are P.E. and English. His telephone number is 256-4328. You can e-mail her at Linmei @sina. Com. I hope you can become good friends.

Your friend,

Lily

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，写一封电子邮件介绍你的好朋友Lin Mei 给Jack认识。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Lin Mei is...，Let me introduce ...，She is...，Her birthday is ...，She likes ...，I hope...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后希望他们成为好朋友。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了写信的目的是让Jack认识我的好朋友Lin Mei，接下来介绍Lin Mei的年龄、生日、喜好，电话和电子邮件，最后希望他们成为好朋友。此处want to do sth, make friends with, let sb do sth, like doing sth, e-mail sb at等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。