Question

书面表达

你即将毕业，学校要举行2016届毕业典礼。假设你将作为毕业生代表在会上用英语发言，请写一篇发言稿。

内容包括：

1．回顾几年来的校园生活。

2．看今天自己的进步。

3．感谢老师和同学们的帮助；感谢父母的支持；向母校及老师们致以祝福。

作文要求：

1．不能照抄原文；不得出现学校和学生的真实姓名；    、．

2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear teachers and students，

It’s a great honor for me to have such a chance to make a speech at this special moment and special place．First,I would like to say“thank you”to all the teachers and the students here．

Answer

Dear teachers and students,

It's a great honor for me to have such a chance to make a speech at this special moment and special place．First, I would like to say "thank you" to all the teachers and the students here.

It has been three years since we came to the beautiful school.When we were here years ago ,we found everything new and strange. We were curious about everything .

Our teachers are very friendly and helpful.They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting .When we have difficulties in learning ,they are patient enough to help us. We could hardly succeed without our teacher’s efforts .We’ve also made lots of friends here. We feel very happy in the school .Also ,I want to say “thank you” to our parents.Thanks for their support. Thanks for what they have done for us .

Last ,I wish our school more and more beautiful ,our teachers healthy and happy, and all of us a good future！

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求以毕业生代表的名义写一篇发言稿，首先是回顾过去，这一部分应该用过去时；然后是描述今天的进步，用现在时；最后是感谢与祝愿，可以用现在时、将来时。由于本发言稿是代表同学们做的，故用第一人称复数we。应注意连词和固定短语的用法，注意要包括所有提纲内容并作适当的发挥。

写作亮点：本范文第一段是“感谢”，第二段是“回忆”，第三段是“进步”，第四段是“祝愿”。短文层次清楚，条理文明，包含了提纲的所有要点。主题鲜明，中心突出。短文用到了不定式作主语、宾语、状语的句型，用了主语从句、宾语从句、定语从句等复合句句式。恰当地运用了thank…for…等等短语及句型。使本范文更加具体、生动、文采横溢。

考点：考查提纲作文。